Trixter Posted July 2, 2010 Report Share Posted July 2, 2010 OMG this is some nice stuff can i interview you okat thanksQ1.What was your inspiration?Q2.If you could sell the copyrights for 42000 ¥ would you?Q3.Are you planning to write more chapters and/or volumes?Q4.How did you feel while writing this?Q5.Are you going to give picture examples or describe how the characters look? Or is that our job?Q6.If Animax asked you for the copyrights to make this an Anime, would you?Q7.How did you think it through? Or like me do you just write what comes to you then improvise(As a fellow novelist) Please quote this post and then answer in BOLD[/b[ inside the quote for answers ~Trixter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted July 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2010 OMG this is some nice stuff can i interview you okat thanksQ1.What was your inspiration?Why ask? But since you asked me' date=' Bartimaeus. Good stuff.[/b']Q2.If you could sell the copyrights for 42000 ¥ would you?No. Just, no.Q3.Are you planning to write more chapters and/or volumes?Of course.Q4.How did you feel while writing this?Happy.Q5.Are you going to give picture examples or describe how the characters look? Or is that our job?I don't feel like doing it with people I've never met before in real life.Q6.If Animax asked you for the copyrights to make this an Anime, would you?Once it's confirmed it's not a peten.Q7.How did you think it through? Or like me do you just write what comes to you then improvise(As a fellow novelist)Think what? Please quote this post and then answer in BOLD[/b[ inside the quote for answers ~TrixterYou seem like a real trickster. Also, things on money are unallowed here. If you're just joking, just stop it. If you're serious, I have Crab at my side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trixter Posted July 3, 2010 Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 Oh sorry for that(I wasn't seroius;) just aking) And by IT I meant the storyline 150 POSTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!3 STARS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted July 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 ......well, then. Just, the joke sounds seriously like you're some peten. So I request you stop it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trixter Posted July 3, 2010 Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 eh? What's a peten if i may ask Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted July 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 Someone who tricks others using money. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 @Chapter 5: Hm, double-space between paragraphs. It'll work wonders on readability. You seem to have unified the text much better; the tone is more consistent than before, and the narrative flows much better. When the tone changed before, the reader would be jolted out of the world you'd constructed. That didn't happen to me this chapter, it reads better as a result. Your grammar is still iffy, but it's more than good enough given your location. The effort is clear, the improvement is noticeable, and the read is quite entertaining. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Thanks ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Chapters ~7 added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted July 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 bit bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 Keep an eye on Sammy. She's in mortal peril of becoming a Sue. Kewl how she runs Yukari's Sukima business, though. She'd be one helluva unit in an RPG. Odd how you used the accusative for Cruorem (e.g. "cruorem ex me iam profundet,"); most would have used the nominative. It's refreshing. When I saw the obviously-mortal writer of The Testament of Extrarius, I was practically jumping out of my seat in happiness. An ancient prophecy would have been boring, but it's obviously a lead-in to an exciting villain. Usually, stories are carried by their unusually sympathetic heroes, but an unusual villain will do the job fine in this case. That turned out a lot better than I thought it would. So yeah. Watch out for Sam, good luck with Extrarius, review me pl0x. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted July 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 Thanks ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted July 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 Chapters 8 and 9 added. Dominus makes his first appearance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted July 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 bumped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted July 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2010 Bumped again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted July 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2010 It's really depressing how people make their own Fan Fics, yet don't post much in others. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted July 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2010 Chapters 10 and 11 added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted July 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2010 Bumped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Erinyes Posted August 5, 2010 Report Share Posted August 5, 2010 I've only read chapter one, and Supreme Gamemaster has already pointed out most of the flaws in terms of grammar and story, so I won't bother. I'm going to continue reading the rest when I'm not so tired, for you seem to have written something pretty good here. Keep up the good work, even if nobody seemed to have commented in a while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted August 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2010 thanks ^^ I've written all of this story here, yet I haven't revised it throughly, and I was shocked at the flaws I had myself. In order to stop them, please wait for some weeks before I post the edited version... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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