My second Set - BlackBlood

[TwilightSoul]

From depths of the underwold the BlackBlood elves emerge, cursed with tainted black blood which is poisonous to other creatures this group of elves weakens their opponent while strengthening their own power.

 

ok so first off i already know the OCG is bad for alot of these cards, i wasent sure how to word some of them. So if anyone can help me with some corrections i would appreciate it.

 

Also i was not sure if these cards effects were to OP, so i dubed down everyones Atk, the highest atk monster in this set is 1500, but i think it is fair.

 

Also i will be adding some more spell and traps later on.

 

lore: All increases and decreases to Atk and Def are reversed for this face up monster.Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed by battle, it is not destroyed. (Damage calculation is applied normally). Each time a Spell Card is activated decreases the Atk and Def of all face-up monsters by 300.

 

 

 

 

 

Lore: All increases and decreases to Atk and Def are reversed for this face up monster. Once per turn you can discard 1 card from your hand to the graveyard to reduce the Atk and Def of 1 face-up monster on your opponent side of the field to zero until the end of the turn.

 

Lore: All increases and decreases to Atk and Def are reversed for this face up monster. When this card destroys a monster by a result of battle and sends it to the graveyard, select 1 face-up monster on the field and decrease it's Atk equal to the Def of the destroyed monster.

 

 

 

Lore:All increases and decreases to Atk and Def are reversed for this face up monster. If your opponet summons, or Special Summons a face-up tuner monster you can Special Summon this card from your hand, and destroy your opponets tuner monster.

 

Lore:All increases and decreases to Atk and Def are reversed for this face up monster. When this monster is normal summoned you can select 1 monster from your deck with "BlackBlood" in it's name and add it to your hand. If this card is destroyed by a card effect controled by your opponent you may select 1 monster from your graveyard with "blackBlood" in it's name and add it to your hand.

 

Lore: All increases and decreases to Atk and Def are reversed for this face up monster. If your opponent controls a monster and you control no monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card sends a monster from the field to the graveyard,Your opponent selects 1 spell card from his/her deck and sends it to the graveyard.

 

Lore: All increases and decreases to Atk and Def are reversed for this face up monster. If your opponent controls a monster and you control no monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card destroys a face-down monster as a result of battle and sends it to the graveyard,Your opponent selects 1 spell card from his/her hand and sends it to the graveyard.

 

 

 

 

 

Lore:All increases and decreases to Atk and Def are reversed for this face up monster. When this monster is normal summoned Select 2 empty spell/trap card zones on your opponet side, as long as this card remains face-up on the field no cards can be set in the selected spell/trap card zone.

 

Lore: 1 "BlackBlood" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

All increases and decreases to Atk and Def are reversed for this face up monster.This card's effect is activated only during the Damage Step of either player's turn. During the Damage step between this card and a face-up Atk position monster, reduce your opponents monster by 200 Atk x its lv.

 

Lore: 1 Tuner + BlackBlood-Avenging Maiden

All increases and decreases to Atk and Def are reversed for this face up monster. When you successfully Synchro Summon this card, decrease the Atk of all face-up monsters on the field equal to the combined lv of all face-up monsters on the field x100. If this card is sent from the field to the graveyard by a card effect controled by your opponet select 1 lv 3 or lower monster with "BlackBlood" in its name from your graveyard and return it to your hand.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[TwilightSoul]

Sorry for the long wait guys, but here is my set so please leave me some feedback

[SirtyStan]

Hey... Because of your PM, I'll rate your cards and fix the OCG errors, as well as seeing if the cards are OP'ed. I'll do each card seperately. My Rating of your cards:

 

[spoiler=NOTES]

NOTES: Your cards are good, but with the BlackBlood monster's abilities, the ATK and DEF changes are reversed. But with the BlackBlood - Arcane Corrupter's ability, the ATK and DEF are DECREASED. So, because of his 2 different abilities, does he really lose 300 ATK and DEF, or does he gain 300 ATK and DEF? The key to this is wording, which is where I come in. They way I wrote all of the BlackBlood monster's abilities, they still lose 300 ATK and DEF with BlackBlood - Arcane Corrupter's ability. Also, with the way I just worded that, all effects of your monsters that change the ATK and DEF of monsters on your side of the field AREN'T reversed. Instead, you should up the ATK and DEF of your monsters, or change the effect. Due to time and space needed, maybe even into the MB's, I will only do some cards. Then you can change your other cards based on the spelling/wording/grammer of the cards that I did. Also, remember to click the "Random" button on the game code so it looks more realistic. Finally, the effects of Spell and Trap cards changing the ATK and DEF of your BlackBloods ARE changed.

 

 

[spoiler=BlackBlood - Arcane Corrupter]

Proper Description (OCG errors, etc.): "Whenever a card is activated that changes this card's ATK or DEF, that card's effects are reversed. Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed by battle, it is not destroyed (damage calculation is applied normally). Whenever a Spell card is activated, decrase the ATK and DEF of all face-up monsters on the field."

Other Errors: None.

OP'edness: With the way I worded it (mentioned in the "NOTES" spoiler), It's fine.

 

 

[spoiler=BlackBlood - Arcane Weaver]

Proper Description: "Whenever a card is activated that changes this card's ATK or DEF, that card's effects are reversed. If you control a face-up "BlackBlood" monster, you may Special Summon this card from your hand."

Other Errors: It has the same game code as "BlackBlood - Arcane Corrupter".

OP'edness: None.

 

 

[spoiler=BlackBlood - Lunar Walker]

Proper Description: "Whenever a card is activated that changes this card's ATK or DEF, that card's effects are reversed. If a monster is Special Summoned, decrease that card's ATK and DEF by 1000 points."

Other Errors: The "W" in "Walker" should be capitalized.

OP'edness: The way I worded it (mentioned in the "NOTES" spoiler), it's okay.

 

 

[spoiler=BlackBlood - Rouge]

Proper Description: "Whenever a card is activated that changes this card's ATK or DEF, that card's effects are reversed. If you control a face-up Tuner monster, this card can be Special Summoned from your hand."

Other Errors: None.

OP'edness: The way I worded it (In the card description), it's just dandy.

 

 

[spoiler=BlackBlood - Shadow Caster]

Proper Description: "Whenever a card is activated that changes this card's ATK or DEF, that card's effects are reversed. If this card is in your graveyard during your Standby Phase, decrease the ATK of all face-up monsters on the field by 200 points."

Other Errors: In the card name, there should be a "space" in between "Shadow" and "Caster".

OP'edness: In the way I worded it (In the "NOTES" spoiler), it's good.

 

 

[spoiler=BlackBlood - Shizaki]

Proper Description: "Whenever a card is activated that changes this card's ATK or DEF, that card's effects are reversed. Once per turn, you may discard 1 card from your hand to change the ATK of 1 of your opponent's monsters to 0, until the End Phase."

Other Errors: It has the same game code as "BlackBlood - Arcane Corrupter".

OP'edness: It's good.

 

 

[spoiler=BlackBlood - Sword Mistress]

Proper Description: "Whenever a card is activated that changes this card's ATK or DEF, that card's effects are reversed. Once per turn, if this card destroys an opponent's monster in battle, you may decrease the ATK of 1 face-up monster equal to the DEF of the destroyed monster."

Other Errors: None.

OP'edness: The way I worded it (mentioned in the "NOTES" spoiler), it's okay.

 

 

[spoiler=BlackBlood - Valkyrie]

Proper Description: "Whenever a card is activated that changes this card's ATK or DEF, that card's effects are reversed. During each of your Standby Phases, decrease the ATK of all face-up monsters on the field by 300 for each monster on your side of the field."

Other Errors: It has the same game code as "BlackBlood - Rouge".

OP'edness: In the way I worded it (mentioned in the "NOTES" spoiler) it's good.

 

 

 

By the way, If you haven't already, look at and rate my "Bone Counter" deck!

[spoiler=Bone Counter Deck]

Click Me!

 

 

 

FINAL NOTES: if you wanna keep your cards with the same effects (as in, BlackBlood - Arcane Corrupter's ability is still REVERSED), then you should make the first effect of all of your monsters this: ""Whenever a card's effect is activated that changes this card's ATK or DEF, that card's effects are reversed.".

 

My final rating of your cards is 8.3/10. Keep up the good work!

[Jamesgent111]

nice a few spell/trape OP and the monsters are just strangley effective, overall 8/10

[Rorschach Inkblott]

haha Hooray for WoW and Blood Elves!

[SirtyStan]

I just thought I'd bump the thread, to be nice. Up to the top we go! By the way, the Finished Sets sub-forum doesn't get much attention. Why don't you redo the post (in spoilers, to save space) in the Realistic Cards forum.

[TwilightSoul]

Ty sirtrystan and everyone for the feedback. I am sorry i havent posted in a while, When i get the time i will rewrite my cards to say ""Whenever a card's effect is activated that changes this card's ATK or DEF, that card's effects are reversed " and work out a few things. Thanks again for the feedback guys.

[SirtyStan]

Awww... Thanks...