kick ass

[.:Sasuke Uchiha:.]

[Dizzy~]

OP'd and bad OCG.

Effects not creative.

 

0/10

[.:Sasuke Uchiha:.]

the efects are the only things i could think of. post more pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[Dizzy~]

3/4 of them have the same effect, just re-writen. You can come up with something more creative.

[.:Sasuke Uchiha:.]

ill chang the effects of red mist and kick ass

[Zeno101200]

Dizzy~ covered about everything I was going to say.

[Dizzy~]

Dizzy~ covered about everything I was going to say.

 

lol

[.:Sasuke Uchiha:.]

there i fixed it

[Zeno101200]

Now the OCGs still bad and Dave Lizewski is horribly overpowered.

[Midoraku]

heh... at first there has standarts to writing some eff's, for example -

pierce damage:

"During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent."'

 

and pictures badly oversized. You must use square pictures - cut them or redact in photoshop or other.

 

and fot p.s.

you red mist eff and eff ef his car not so usable in chain. Better if you'll be able to add car card to hand but not use it immediatly.