Spellcaster set

[Thatisnotwhatshesaid714]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[SirtyStan]

This is a good set. Just some minor errors in a few cards, and a bit of a bigger one. 7.6/10.

 

Since I'm nice, I'll help you edit them:

 

Basic Battlemage: It's great, you just need to add a period at the end (I'm just picky that way).

 

Bastard Gabor: This card should be a Ritual Monster. By the way, the "You must also..." part you only need to have in the Ritual Spell card. Otherwise, you would have to send levels up to 7 TWICE. Also, he's only a level 4. You need to change him to a level 7 (due to the level amount said on the description of the Ritual Spell card), or change the level requirement to 4. Finally, he's a bit OP'ed. Change his DEF to 2500 and his ATK to 2800 or so, and it'll be much better.

 

Dark Spellcaster: You should change him to a level 7 monster. Also, you need to capitalize words such as "Normal Summoned" or "Set" (I know that you already capitalized the "Normal" part).

 

Mystical Orb: The description should be this (you can copy and paste this to save time): "When this card is activated, you may choose 1 of the following effects: · Look at the top 5 cards of your deck and place them on the top of your deck in the same order. · Look at the top 5 cards of your opponent’s deck and place them on the top of your opponent’s deck in the same order."

 

Sorceress of Mystery: There is a minor error. It should be "If this card is face-up on your side of the field, ...". You also have to capitalize stuff like "Spell card" and "Spell Counter". I also did a Counter deck. Click on the following link to see it!

[spoiler=Bone Counter Deck Link]

Bone Counter Deck

 

 

 

Staff of the Nine: It should say: "Equip to only a Spellcaster-type monster. The equipped monster gains 500 ATK points."

 

Winged Calculos: I'm being picky again. It should say: ""Calculos" + 1 Winged Beast-type monster"

 

Finally, a few of the pictures are blurry...

 

It may seem like I'm treating you like a beginner, but I'm not. Even though my stars say that I'm a noob, I know my Yu-Gi-Oh! lores. I'm just trying to help you!