assasins creed

[.:Sasuke Uchiha:.]

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I guess this will be fun to teach a member how to make a card

 

First of all the pic has big word on it which should not be on a card

The pic really needs a BG

10 stars...you know thats as much as the God Cards right,IMO the star level is too high

You forgot to put the set ID and the circulation on the card

I don't mind fake types so you don't need to change its type

Proper OCG for effect This card gains 300x ATK and DEF for each monster in your Graveyard.

The effect is really oped since the base attack is already 3500 which is a little high for a monster

3.3/10

Your still a new member so don't take my rate as somthing bad,take it as a lesson and try to make better cards next time.

[.:Sasuke Uchiha:.]

thanx dfgk101

ill fix them

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NP usally new members when I rate there cards they get all spazy on me.

I'm sure you will improve.

It took me up to 3 star to start being a good card maker,really I'm still not that good but I am decent

[.:Sasuke Uchiha:.]

i fixed it

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Well I have to say the pic did improve but see how there is a black border around it?

That is not supposed to be on cards.

If you need a good website for pictures go http://photobucket.com/ or http://www.deviantart.com/

 

Also change the effect into this if you want it to be worded right: This card gains 300x ATK and DEF for each monster in your Graveyard.