Tags.... Aren't my strong point.....

[-DG-]

[align=center]I think it's okay..

 

 

V2:

 

NEW V3:

 

Stock BG:

http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs31/i/2008/236/8/9/Machinery_by_Gundross.jpg

 

Render:

http://www.planetrenders.net/renders/albums/userpics/215896/Prototype%20-%20Alex%20Mercer%20-%20Star89er.png[/align]

[JG.]

Actually, it's not overly bad. Overblended though. Also too blurred in some places.

[-DG-]

Which spots are too blurred? I'm guessing almost all of the right side, right?

 

EDIT: Added a V2

[Dark Lightning]

Render is overused; but the tag itself isn't too bad.

Like JG said, it's a bit too blurred.

It's one of your best though.

[JG.]

The hairnet thing on V2 is too distracting.

[Guest JoshIcy]

Too much going on as it is (with the render), right now it looks like a head on an extremely detailed C4D.

[-DOOM]

Too much going on as it is (with the render)' date=' right now it looks like a head on an extremely detailed C4D.

[/quote']

 

I think the C4D you mentioned is actually an arm.

 

http://extreme.pcgameshardware.de/attachments/116847d1246373263-sammelthread-prototype-prototype-20090205072740735.jpg

[Guest JoshIcy]

Too much going on as it is (with the render)' date=' right now it looks like a head on an extremely detailed C4D.

[/quote']

 

I think the C4D you mentioned is actually an arm.

 

http://extreme.pcgameshardware.de/attachments/116847d1246373263-sammelthread-prototype-prototype-20090205072740735.jpg

 

"looks like". Im fully aware that it's an arm.

[-DG-]

[spoiler=Render (BIG)]

 

 

As for the cyclone fence, blur? That's what the BG actually was in V1.

[-DOOM]

Too much going on as it is (with the render)' date=' right now it looks like a head on an extremely detailed C4D.

[/quote']

 

I think the C4D you mentioned is actually an arm.

 

http://extreme.pcgameshardware.de/attachments/116847d1246373263-sammelthread-prototype-prototype-20090205072740735.jpg

 

"looks like". Im fully aware that it's an arm.

 

And I wasn't fully aware that you know it's an arm. I apologise, I only tried to help.

[-DG-]

Added V3.

[chairman ali]

I prefer V3 overall but still that render isn't really the best choice. Work on darkening the sides and cleaning it up. Then add some cool lighting. The way to do this is to gaussian blur the whole thing and the add a layer mask. Brush over the focal. Make a new layer, take the brush tool, set the opacity on 40 and brush the sides with black. After that you need to pick a colour that will go well with the sig (orange perhaps), brush on where it is blurred (not too much though just where the blur and render meet) and then set that layer to linear dodge. That might turn into something cooler with better atmosphere.

[-DG-]

How do I clean it uP?

[chairman ali]

Gaussian blur. Just erase over the focal and keep everything else blurred. That means the stuff the the focal has (except the figure. Just keep the figure) will be blurred.

[-DG-]

Okay. I'll do that. See if it does good (Which it will of course ^_^)