My First Card Its Pretty Cool

[I KOed God]

[Dream Cabbage]

if it's level 8 it shouldn't have 3100 ATK, about 2800 would be nicer. A couple of OCG errors like normal summoned should be Normal Summoned and special summoned should be Special Summoned. Also opponents hand should be opponent's hand.

 

for your first card, amazing but you do need to put an EN00 number on and where you've put dragon(not the one next to effect) that should be like Limited Edition or First Edition or just leave it blank.

 

 

I'd give it 7/10, good job!

[NeXodus]

This is very cool...

 

Well except for the fact that the pic is bad and the OCG is awful.

 

When this card is Summoned, you can draw 1 card or discard 1 card from your opponent's hand.

 

Why no period at the end? And it's SO overpowered.

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if it's level 8 it shouldn't have 3100 ATK' date=' about 2800 would be nicer. A couple of OCG errors like normal summoned should be Normal Summoned and special summoned should be Special Summoned. Also opponents hand should be opponent's hand.

 

for your first card, amazing but you do need to put an EN00 number on and where you've put dragon(not the one next to effect) that should be like Limited Edition or First Edition or just leave it blank.

 

 

I'd give it 7/10, good job!

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You rate cards bad. This card is so overpowered and there are some punctuation errors. You DONT need to put EN00 at the end. Bad.

[I KOed God]

How is the pic bad?

[Dream Cabbage]

I really like the pic, besides it's his first card, he needs to get into the jist of things and I think he's a gret card designer. You do need to catch up on your OCG though but thats the only problem.

 

Also I think your a fan of Dragons, cool.

[NeXodus]

How is the pic bad?

 

IMO it's bad.

[Dream Cabbage]

Well where did you get it from, if you got it from Google images then you would be better using deviantart.com and search for some really good images. I use it and that's where I got the image for my member card which is below.