Stick Spells Posted May 25, 2010 Report Share Posted May 25, 2010 Well, I felt bored, So I made this. Feel free to rate and comment. [spoiler=Ultimate Demon Warrior] LORE: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 3 DARK monsters from your Deck when this card is in your Graveyard. This card cannot be effected by the effects of Spell and Trap Cards. When this monster battles a LIGHT or Fairy-Type monster, it gains 500 ATK. CREDITS TO GOOGLE & http://www.jhalpe.com/img/Items/2000/1508.jpg [spoiler=Demon Princess] LORE:You can Special Summon this card from your hand. If you do, decrease the ATK and DEF by 1000. When this card is on the field, during the second turn, you can Special Summon 1 monster with "Demon" in its name on your side of the field. If it is a Level 6 or higher, cannot declare an attack this turn CREDITS TO GOOGLE & http://idrawgirls.com/images/2009Q1/demon-princess.jpg [spoiler=Demon Shout] LORE:Acrivate only with 1 or more monsters with "Demon" in theis name, on your side of the field. Decrease the ATK of 1 monster your opponent's control by 500 during the End Phase. CREDITS TO GOOGLE & http://www.omni-labs.com/images/Mike_Demon_375x400.jpg [spoiler=Demon Knight] LORE:Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, put a "Demon"-Counter on this card. When this card has 10 "Demon"-Counters, you can Tribute this card to send 1 DARK monster from your Deck to your Graveyard. CREDITS TO GOOGLE & http://media.photobucket.com/image/demon/JollyRogersOne/demon_knight_by_Edragon.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted May 25, 2010 Report Share Posted May 25, 2010 This card cannot be Summoned except by its own effect. When this card is in your Graveyard, and you have no monsters on your side of the field, you may Special Summon this monster on your side of the field. This card cannot be effected by the effects of Spell and Trap Cards. the pic is overused...the card is to OP'ed...is to easy to summon....so 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stick Spells Posted May 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2010 Okay, I'm gonna try to remake it. EDIT: Remade. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted May 25, 2010 Report Share Posted May 25, 2010 Sorry...but I found some other OCG errors... This card cannot be Summoned except by its own effect. When this card is in your Graveyard, and you have no monsters on your side of the field, you can Special Summon this monster. This card cannot be effected by the effects of Spell and Trap Cards. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stick Spells Posted May 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2010 Wheres the mistake with monsters? O.oAnd I like may better [o.o] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted May 25, 2010 Report Share Posted May 25, 2010 "may" it's wrong OCG mate!sorry...that is the correct OCG may=canlet me give you a better effect... This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 3 DARK monsters from your Deck when this card is in your Graveyard.This card cannot be effected by the effects of Spell and Trap Cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stick Spells Posted May 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2010 Well. okay. BUT im gonna add some more to the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted May 26, 2010 Report Share Posted May 26, 2010 not when this card, change to while this card is face-up on your Graveyard after were destroyed italic means suggestion,it gonna make it more blanced Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted May 26, 2010 Report Share Posted May 26, 2010 Ok mate!! 10/10!! it is awesome!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stick Spells Posted May 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2010 yey! a 10/10, ty :D _________________________To mahandra, It isnt supposed to be destroyed first, It's supposed to be destroyed by an effect, so that it can be send to the Grave. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted May 26, 2010 Report Share Posted May 26, 2010 not when this card' date=' change to while this card is face-up on your Graveyard [i']after were destroyed[/i] italic means suggestion,it gonna make it more blanced how can a card be "face-up" into the Graveyard??????????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted May 26, 2010 Report Share Posted May 26, 2010 yeah but not when its a while, thats just a to make it lovely read in to effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stick Spells Posted May 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2010 Say, are you guys gonna make my topic a chat place? >_> Cus... you know, you have PM :P EDIT: ADDED MOAR CARDZ!!!!!!! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted May 26, 2010 Report Share Posted May 26, 2010 Demon PrincessLORE:You can Special Summon this card from your hand. If you do, decrease the ATK and DEF by 1000. When this card is on the field, during the second turn, you can Special Summon 1 monster with "Demon" in its name on your side of the field. If it is a Level 6 or higher, cannot declare an attack this turn. <--this italics will make your effect more balanced Demon KnightLORE:Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, put a "Demon"-Counter on this card. When this card has 10 "Demon"-Counters, you can Tribute this card to send 1 DARK monster from your Deck to your Graveyard. Demon ShoutLORE:Acrivate only with 1 or more monsters with "Demon" in theis name, on your side of the field. Decrease the ATK of 1 monster your opponent's control by 500 during the End Phase. <---you can put out the italics but you must change the Trap Card to a Continuous Trap Card as you can see you have some OCG....that's not bad...you'll learn from those OCG corrections...I can see you made a nice card combo! very good mate!! 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stick Spells Posted May 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2010 KK, I'm gonna do the OCG now. Also, like the pics? :P EDIT: Done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted May 26, 2010 Report Share Posted May 26, 2010 the Demon Knight has low rezolution...the othe pic are ok! ohh...I find an error in my correction...sorry about that... in Demon ShoutLORE:Acrivate only with 1 or more monsters with "Demon" in their name, ........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abyssimal Posted May 26, 2010 Report Share Posted May 26, 2010 they're ok exept for the las 26.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stick Spells Posted June 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2010 BUMP!!! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Umbreon~ Posted June 2, 2010 Report Share Posted June 2, 2010 the princess pic is revealing... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stick Spells Posted June 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2010 lol o.o i didnt even notice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Umbreon~ Posted June 3, 2010 Report Share Posted June 3, 2010 That's why you don't pic the first card you see Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stick Spells Posted June 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2010 Eeh. I went through lots of pics, i just didnt notice that. It's not like im looking at that one spot -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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