my second card

[maplekid]

When a monster is sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon this monster from your deck or hand and Special Summon the monster that was sent to the Graveyard this turn. When this effect is activated, increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 400 points and increase it's Level by 1.

[TrickyPooBoy]

Some OCG errors. Should go in AOC. Decent, however. Not too bad.

 

7/10.

[~Marluxia~]

101/10

[TrickyPooBoy]

That's an odd rate xD

 

I'd actually say not bad for a newbie.

 

EDIT: I already posted here, xD

[Dream Cabbage]

OCG fix:

When a monster is sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon this monster from your deck or hand and Special Summon the monster that was sent to the Graveyard this turn. When this effect is activated, increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 400 points and increase it's Level by 1.

 

cool card, very imaginative, 5.7/10

[maplekid]

thx and cool card

[DX DX USER]

nice card! just capitalize the Type.

10/10

[touzaikokon]

When a monster is sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon this monster from your Deck or hand and Special Summon the monster that was sent to the Graveyard this turn. When this effect is activated, increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 400 points and increase it's Level by 1.

 

Pretty good, especially for a second card. The effect is nice, although I think it's a bit OP'd to be able to summon from the Deck or hand. But at least it's not a Tuner, or it would be insanely broken.

 

That being said, here's my OCG fix:

When a monster is sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon this monster from your hand or Deck, and the destroyed monster from your Graveyard. When this effect is activated, increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 400, and increase its Level by 1.

 

I think that'll do it.

 

Again, though, great job. 8/10

[Maz]

8.5/10