first card i made

[fate21876]

can you please rate my card out of 10 so i know if i need some work or a lot of work haha

[Rookie-Duelist]

Need to work on card effect wording, bit confusing. 7/10

[fate21876]

Ok thanks for the comment.

[.:Blu:.]

OCG Correction: Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 200 during each of your Draw Phase. This card cannot be destroyed by the effect(s) of Spell or Trap cards.

 

I think this card is pretty balanced....... or maybe not........ 6/10 Good effort

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[fate21876]

much appreciated would i have to post a new forum to show the corrections ?

[.:Blu:.]

no just replace the image, also if you ever create a card with a long effect make sure to post the effect on the thread as well, perferably in a spoiler, if you don't know what that is just tell me.

[fate21876]

ok thanks for your help ehhh Ive seen it in forums but i dont know how to do it

[.:Blu:.]

Alright for a spoiler here is what you do:

 

[spoiler=Insert title here]Insert content here[/spoiler]

[fate21876]

OK thanks a lot.