.Legend Posted May 27, 2010 Report Share Posted May 27, 2010 I got the pic. from Photobucket.This the first card I made after my 3 month hiates on my Birthday ^^[spoiler=Effect]This card is also treated as a Machine-Type Monster. If this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon one "Tinkered Fairy" from your Deck or hand on to your side of the field. If this card is destroyed by a Spell or Trap Card, you can remove one Fairy-Type monster from your hand out of play to Special Summon one "Tinkered Fairy" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wolfman505 Posted May 27, 2010 Report Share Posted May 27, 2010 7.5/10 not a bad card just shortened the card effect to make it balanced and make sure the grammar is correct. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touzaikokon Posted May 27, 2010 Report Share Posted May 27, 2010 Please post the effect text so I can read and rate without ruining my eyes. Thanks. EDIT: Thank you. Review in post below. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Legend Posted May 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2010 - Added effect in spoilerThx for the rateingAnd wolfman, the balance is its low attack and Defence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wolfman505 Posted May 27, 2010 Report Share Posted May 27, 2010 yea, to me the effect sounded like it repeated itself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Legend Posted May 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2010 Still, its mainly for protection.In the second Special Summon effect you have to tribute a fairy typee from your hand so I doupht that anyone would use that unless there in a pinch, but still its a sacrifice. The first Special Summon Abilaty is balanced by the low ATK and DEF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wolfman505 Posted May 27, 2010 Report Share Posted May 27, 2010 i agree Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touzaikokon Posted May 27, 2010 Report Share Posted May 27, 2010 "This card is also treated as a Machine-Type Monster. If this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon one "Tinkered Fairy" from your Deck or hand on to your side of the field. If this card is destroyed by a Spell or Trap Card, you can remove one Fairy-Type monster from your hand out of play to Special Summon one "Tinkered Fairy" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard." Okay, so this card is a recruiter that grabs if its destroyed by battle, or if its destroyed by Spells/Traps. Nice, but let's see if we can't clear up the OCG: "This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. If this card is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon 1 "Tinkered Fairy" from your hand or Deck. If this card is destroyed by the effect of a Spell or Trap card, you can remove 1 Fairy-Type monster in your hand from play to Special Summon 1 "Tinkered Fairy" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard." They're small fixes, but I think they help. Aside from that, seems good. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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