aleos uchiha Posted May 27, 2010 Report Share Posted May 27, 2010 [/img]lore:this monster can be special sommoned by making your life points 1. when this monster attack a DEFposition monster it inflicts diffirence damage. when this monster is targeted by an attack or by a card effect remove it with another monster from your field. to negate the effict and end the oponent turn. this card return at end phase to your side of the field. with half the amaunt you payed added to its original ATK points. can you please tell me if it has any ocg erors and i will fix it. thanks.please guys till me what i need to fix in it ?? :(please guys till me what i need to fix in it ?? :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wolfman505 Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 Okay i won't rate out of ten, but fix grammar in effect and if its a union monster give a union monster effect. Fix the card name (you can do much better) and if you're not going with Union ability come up with a better and more balanced effect okay. If you need help look in my signature and click on thread address. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aleos uchiha Posted May 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 lore: this monster can only be special sommoned by making your life points 1. when this monster attacks a DEF position monster it inflicts diffirence damage. when this monster is targeted by an attack or by a card effect remove it from play with another monster from your field. to negate the effect/distroction of this card and end the oponent turn. this card return at end phase to your side of the field. with half the amaunt you payed when it was spiceal sommoned and add it to its original ATK points. i hope this one is better8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 Ok noobs keep telling u its great srry its not.HOWEVER YOU ARE A BRAND NEW MEMBERSo post the effect and I will fix it up a bit for youPic is pretty bad by the wayIll try to help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aleos uchiha Posted May 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 thanks bro i will try to make it better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 post effect and i will helpThis card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by paying 2000 Life Points. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower thatn the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. When this card is targeted by the effects of a Spell or Trap card destroy it immediately. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by its own effect, than you may pay 700 Life Points to Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position with half of its original ATK and DEF. New name:Broux - Barrier Breaker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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