ThePharoahAtem Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 Malefic Darkness Dragon Effect:1 DARK Tuner + Remove 2 or more non-tuner monsters in your graveyard from play.When this monster is synchro summoned, you can destroy cards on the field up to the number of cards you removed from play to synchro summon this monster. Image credit goes to PeaceMaker24 on the anime friends hangout (My first card so it's probably not that great...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest NeoBlueDragon Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 Ohai. Divine-Beast isn't really a type for mere synchros. Make it a dragon, and hit return in between the Synchro costs. Other then that, contact one of them OCG nuts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePharoahAtem Posted May 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 Ok thanks I will update the card when I have those errors fixed lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:ABC: Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 ok, just change the divine like said above then because the cost is good for the effect lower the level and attack down to like 7 stars and 2500 ATK, that makes it fairer, and aside from that i like just the basic idea, plain and simples just fine. 4/10 without changes and 8/10 with changes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePharoahAtem Posted May 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 The card has been updated with all of the above suggestions lol. Thanks guys, I really appreciate the help! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:ABC: Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 ok now it's 8/10 and more playable and not forbidden list stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePharoahAtem Posted May 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 K thanx for the opinions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dxjxc Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 I have a few rewordings:summoned = Synchro Summonequal to = up tocards you removed = monsters removedsummon = Synchro Summon Another thing I like to is, when referring to the monster itself, use the word monster instead of card, ie. When this monster is summoned. I love the idea of removing from the grave. I do recommend lowering level and ATK like Ray said though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 fixed OCG:"When this card is Summoned, you can destroy cards on the field equal to the number cards you removed from play to Summon this card."ive seen this pic before ive used it for a dark synchroits opeso 7.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePharoahAtem Posted May 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 K I've made the improvements stated above. I can't believe it's getting such good ratings for my first card lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fefe2411 Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 good 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card_Critic24 Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 Good card but 1) Malefic cards are Effect Monsters not Synchro. 2) Malefics have a specific design which I don't see here and is practically impossible to get unless your a really good artist because of the obvious lack of Malefic concept art. So, despite the picture and card type, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dxjxc Posted June 2, 2010 Report Share Posted June 2, 2010 It could use a name change, since it doesn't belong in the Malefic archetype. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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