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Ghoulish Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 lol, man way Opd. ur a new member and have done the ultimate mistake Opd dragon, okay pic is blue eyes ultimate, need to find new pic ocg:"1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monster(s)This card is unaffected by card effects. This card gains 500 ATK for every Dragon-Type monster in your Graveyard. Whenever this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, inflict 500 damage to your opponent." Ok first problem is the name essentially it comes out like this : BLUE EYES JUDGEMENT DRAGON. to avoid this capitaliza the first letter of words, except for "the" "of" words like that. so like this = Blue Eyes Judgement Dragon, if you used soemthing like blue eyes judgement of dragons then it would look like this = Blue Eyes Judgement of Dragons. Ocgs been fixed, now 4500 atk?, lower it to 3000, 3500 ATM! and try to make the efefct more balanced basically u summon this card u win. trychanging the effect making it have soemn kind of drawback if its gonna be that powerful.10 starATK/3000 DEF/2500 eg: "1 Dragon-Type Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner Dragon-Type monsters When this card is Summoned destroy all other Dragon-Type monsters you control. This card gains 300 ATK for every Dragon-Type monster in either player's Graveyard. This card cannot be targeted by card effects while you control at least 1 other Dragon-Type monster. Whenever this card declares an attack Tribute 2 other Dragon-Type monsters you control, other then this card, if you do not then destroy this card and pay Life Points equal to half this monster's ATK." Ok so basically got a lot of drawbacks and alot of pluses, still think its abit Opd with my new version but yea just try to make it balanced and not overly opd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dxjxc Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 I agree with everything Maadd1 said. But I have some more suggestions. Try making its summoning requirement like the "Majestic" synchros.1 Tuner + 1 non-Tuner + 1 "Blue Eyes White Dragon" Then make the effect something like:This monster cannot be Special Summoned, except by Synchro Summon. When this monster is Synchro Summoned, destroy all other monsters you control. (Then either) This monster gains 300 ATK for each Dragon-type monster in either player's Graveyard. (or) Negate the activation and effect of your opponent's Spell and Trap cards that target Dragon-type monsters you control. (Not both) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aleos uchiha Posted May 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 OK CHECK this out:D[/img]1 synchro tuner + 1 blue eyes white dragon.this monster can be synchro sommoned during your oponents turn. when it's sommoned sucsessfuly chose and activate 1 of the foloing effects. 1 pay half your life points to destroy all monsters/spell&traps on the field. exept it self but you cant attack this turn. 2 send this monster to the grave yard to remove 12 cards of the oponents deck and enflict 300 pts of damage to oponent for each monster removed by this effect. 3 this monster can enflict 3000 pts of damage to oponent. it will be removed from play at the end phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dxjxc Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 Nobody likes a card with too many optional effects. One more thing, there is already a card that sychro summons out of normal timing, it's called "Urgent Tuning". One moore thing, OCG s-u-c-k-s, sucks. One MOOORE thing, edit first post, don't repost. Try doing one of the things mentioned earlier, and I give more help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 wholy crap this is terable!ill ix OCG first:"1 Tuner + 1 Blue-Eyes White DragonThis monster can only be Synchro Summoned your 10th turn or more during the Duel. When it's Synchro Summoned successfuly choose and activate 1 of the following effects:-Pay half your life points to destroy all crds on the field, except this card. This card cannot attack the next 3 turns.-Send this monster to the Graveyard to remove 7 cards of the oppoent's Deck and your opponent take 100 points of of damage for each monster removed by this effect. -This monster can attack directly and deal 3000 pts of damage to opponent, remove this card dromplay at your End Phase."this card is over powered and ive seen that pic before.5/10 0_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dxjxc Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 I decided to not even try to fix the card, because of the sheer number of problems.Btw, I've seen the pic too. I used it to make a rather crappy (but good for an amateur) sig for a club. Actually, it's still in my sig... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 please change the pic to something that is not Blue-Eyes Ulimate dragon :/and it is also OP'd as hell OCG needs help as others have pionted out use Deviantart , Tinypic, and other art sites to find good pics n not use pics from real cards plz :/ 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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