Zextra Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 Hey everyone! Here's another boring old SYnchro Dragon. Hope you dont fall asleep reading it. Please rate and comment! Thanks! Lore:1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersThis card gains 300 ATK for each FIRE monster in your Graveyard. By halving this card's ATK, this card can attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the field once each. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can remove 2 FIRE monsters from your Graveyard to Special Summon this card in Defense Position. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dxjxc Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 Only two small OCG errors that I noticed:...on your opponent's side of the field= that your opponent controls (I think that's just the new OCG. By the old OCG this sentence is correct)...remove 2 FIRE monsters from your Graveyard= remove 2 FIRE monsters in your Graveyard from play (Hafta mention where they're going, lol.) Having an even number of ATK makes halving it less of a headache. Adding 100 ATK won't make it OPed. Other than that 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 fixd lore ill point out mistakes:"1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersThis card gains 300 ATK for each FIRE monster in your Graveyard. By halfing this card's ATK, this card can attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the field once each. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can remove 2 FIRE monsters from your Graveyard to Special Summon this card in Defense Position."its very good with set backs and all.and the other thing is that the pic is epic so here you go:8.5/0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dxjxc Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 I spell checked both spellings of halving, and spell check says "halving" is right. Unless you know something I don't about OCG... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 half and halve which sounds better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dxjxc Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 Its just one of those English rules.half becomes halved, halves, halvingleaves is plural for leaf (btw spell checked this whole post... and ironically, I spelled English wrong.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 Thanks everyone for the comments. I appreciate it. Any other suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dxjxc Posted June 11, 2010 Report Share Posted June 11, 2010 Yeah. Make the changes that were suggested. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FriendlyHost Posted June 11, 2010 Report Share Posted June 11, 2010 sweet card, image and effect is perfect (i dunno if ocg is perfect tho) 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted June 11, 2010 Report Share Posted June 11, 2010 OCG fixed already.I think the pic is overused.Pretty basic effect.Not much else to say here... 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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