[TLA] Return Cards

[Yuri Shayk]

[align=center]It's been a loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong time YCM, I would to ask, how are ya? Anything new? What did I miss? :D lol, but that's besides the point. Errrm, I had work to do, and now that it's over, I'mma try and stay long enough online to post / make cards for our huge audience, viewers and criticizers. Here are some cards I whipped up rly quick, Rate, Hate, Appreciate. Again it's been a long time so, tell me if there are ANY ocg errors, (it may have changed or w/e, idk I'm behind, or could just be rusty :P)

 

These card's are primarily Ult, to give you a little extra support in the tough times. Enjoy pl0x. ( lemme know if dey be OP :shock: )

 

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This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. You must pay 400 Life Points during each player's Battle Phase. If you do not, destroy this card. Each time you take damage by Card Effect (except this card), increase your Life Points by 1/4 of the amount taken. During your End Phase, place 1 Plant Growth Counter on this card (max. 5). Increase this Card's DEF by 500 for each counter on this card. While this card has 5 Plant Growth Counters on it, Battle Damage you take is reduced by the amount of damage you would have taken x 200.

 

 

[spoiler=Lore]

This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. You must pay 100 Life Points during each player's Draw Phase. If you do not, destroy this card. Each time you take damage by Card Effect (except this card), inflict 1/4 of the amount taken to your Opponent. During your End Phase, place 1 Dino Scale Counter on this card (max. 5). Increase this Card's Atk by 500 for each counter on this card. While this card has 5 Dino Scale Counters on it, Battle Damage this Card deals is increased by the amount of damage this card regularly would have inflicted x 100.

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[Anbu-of-Sand]

Great OCG. Except.

 

For Ginarra

Def = DEF

 

For Dinodile

Atk = ATK

 

For Both

Card = card (I'm pretty sure)

 

If you can get these cards on the field long enough (10 turns)...

Ginarra will be at 5150 DEF

Dinodile will be at 5300 ATK

 

But it might be kinda hard to keep them on the field for that long since they start out really weak. Other than that the cards seems stable. I'd like to see more of these cards if you are making this a set. 10/10

[dxjxc]

I didn't see many OCG errors, but I'm not an expert in OCG. They don't seem OPed because of the amount of time it takes for them to build power, but if other people complain, you might consider lowering the max counters to 5 and increasing the original ATK of second one. (BTW ATK and DEF is all caps.) I did see typos though. In the first one, the last sentence seems to repeat itself and needs reworded. The second one says Plant Growth Counter in the last sentence. Other than that I think they are a bit wordy but not that bad. Aslo fix Card like Anbu said

 

I don't give scores for rating, but they look good.

 

fixed

[Yuri Shayk]

K I'll get on it. Ty for the comments.

 

Fixed

[dxjxc]

Something I over looked before, the wording of the last sentences on both cards is actually pretty bad. It could be easily misunderstood as 1)gain 199x the damage you would have taken... and 2) multiply damage to your opponent by 100... Not very balanced.

 

Try this:

While this card has 5 Plant Growth Counters on it, decrease Battle Damage you take by the number of Plant Growth Counters on this card x200.

 

and...

While this card has 5 Dino Scale Counters on it, Battle Damage inflicted by this Card is increased by the number of Dino Scale Counters on this card x100.

 

And personally, since these monsters will have over 2600 ATK by the time these effects are active, I think it would be better to change to "While there are fewer than 5 ~whatever~ counters on this card, ..." Just my opinion.