ruletheduel Posted December 31, 2007 Report Share Posted December 31, 2007 This is one of my cards :mrgreen:What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 31, 2007 Report Share Posted December 31, 2007 You have some punctuation ans grammar errors. Better fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted December 31, 2007 Report Share Posted December 31, 2007 same here as glasstin10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ruletheduel Posted December 31, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2007 Looks fine to me.If you mean the token part i'm not surpriseCan you pinpoint and correct (I'm not a good card maker yet) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 31, 2007 Report Share Posted December 31, 2007 After battle you could add a comma, special summon, the two s's need to be in caps, and Attack mode needs to be in caps, that token thing needs to be in caps, and I'm too lazy to find the rest. The errors I just found were only in the 1st sentence. Better work harder...=/Happy New Year! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ruletheduel Posted December 31, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2007 Done that! Anything else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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