Summoned Lord Exodia

[yugiohplayer009]

I know people hate Exodia. But i like it and now you can summon him

This card can only be special summoned by ritual summon. With the ritual magic card "Broken Seal". This card Gains 1000 attack points x the number of "Forbidden One" Card's in your graveyard. This card cannot be equipped with equip spell cards. Also This card cannot attack Face up attack position monsters on your opponents side of the field. if this card attacks your opponents life points directly reduce their life points to 0 you win the duel.

This card is used to ritual summon "Summoned Lord Exodia". You must also offer from your field or hand monsters whose levels equal 10 stars or more, Or alternatively you can remove from play 5 different "forbidden one" cards in your graveyard.

[Jamesgent111]

Umm quite a fail tbh but solid ocg has to make me give you a 8.5/10 oh and dudey pics bad quality exodiah one but the seal one is nicley edited

[jeal1995]

yeah the ocg is good i am going to learn from that cause i allways have errors in my cards ocg

8/10 cause the bad pic of exodia

[Coaster Guy]

I was almost expecting a noobish card. I am extremely impressed to see a new user do such a great card. But seriously, Why make an exodia card?

OCG-perfect

pic-expected it

concept and effect-good.

Impressive for new user.

[SkyKingLx]

WDF IS WRONG WITH YOU PEOPLE THE OCG IS TERRIBLE

[Yang Xiao-Long]

WDF IS WRONG WITH YOU PEOPLE THE OCG IS TERRIBLE

 

SHUT UP. That comment was not helpful in the least. Get out.

 

 

O.K., where to start with the card...

 

Pics are bad. First is blurry, and Broken Seal is Spellbinding Circle with terribly drawn lines. OCG isn't that good. Attempted fixes below.

 

OCG fixes:

Summoned Lord Exodia:

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell "Broken Seal". This card gains 1000 ATK x the number of "The Forbidden One" cards in your graveyard. This card cannot be equipped with Equip Spell Cards. Also This card cannot attack face-up Attack Position monsters on your opponent's field. if this card attacks your opponent directly and reduces their life points to 0, you win the duel.

 

Broken Seal:

This card is used to Ritual Summon "Summoned Lord Exodia". You must also Tribute monsters whose levels equal 10 stars or more from the field or your hand, or you can remove from play 5 different "The Forbidden One" cards from your graveyard.

 

I realize my OCG fix isn't that good, but I tried. Go ask a professional OCG fixer.

 

I realize you're new, so just keep improving.

[LourDeath]

another joke

[NeXodus]

HA. HHAHAHAA! I've been playing WoW to much lately...

 

Horrible OCG. Horrible Pictures. (2nd card: Spellbinding Circle sez hai)

You DON'T use pictures from other cards. And you DON'T use pictures from the Anime.

So, these cards ultimately, FAIL.

[LourDeath]

HA. HHAHAHAA! I've been playing WoW to much lately...

 

Horrible OCG. Horrible Pictures. (2nd card: Spellbinding Circle sez hai)

You DON'T use pictures from other cards. And you DON'T use pictures from the Anime.

So' date=' these cards ultimately, FAIL.

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WoW....

 

the only thing i'm playing is DotA and HoN

 

now HoN is gone... :(

[NeXodus]

HA. HHAHAHAA! I've been playing WoW to much lately...

 

Horrible OCG. Horrible Pictures. (2nd card: Spellbinding Circle sez hai)

You DON'T use pictures from other cards. And you DON'T use pictures from the Anime.

So' date=' these cards ultimately, FAIL.

[/quote']

 

WoW....

 

the only thing i'm playing is DotA and HoN

 

now HoN is gone... :(

 

... I wish I could play DotA. BUT WoW PS's are to addicting! THIS IS AN UNRELATED TOPIC! Man...

[touzaikokon]

I know people hate Exodia. But i like it and now you can summon him

 

That's because people do stuff like this. I'm not going to rate this' date=' but I will put up what [i']should[/i] be the correct OCG. I apologize for any errors I may make; I'm not perfect.

 

This card can only be special summoned by ritual summon. With the ritual magic card "Broken Seal". This card Gains 1000 attack points x the number of "Forbidden One" Card's in your graveyard. This card cannot be equipped with equip spell cards. Also This card cannot attack Face up attack position monsters on your opponents side of the field. if this card attacks your opponents life points directly reduce their life points to 0 you win the duel.

 

"This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card' date=' "Broken Seal". This card gains 1000 ATK for each card in your Graveyard with "Forbidden One" in its name. This card cannot be equipped with Equip Spell Cards. This card cannot attack face-up Attack Position monsters your opponent controls. If this card attacks your opponent directly and reduces their Life Points to 0, you win the Match."[/i']

(At the end, I changed "Duel" to "Match," because that makes more sense. If they just won the Duel, that would be redundant).

 

This card is used to ritual summon "Summoned Lord Exodia". You must also offer from your field or hand monsters whose levels equal 10 stars or more' date=' Or alternatively you can remove from play 5 different "forbidden one" cards in your graveyard.[/b']

 

"This card is used to Ritual Summon "Summoned Lord Exodia". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Levels equal 10 or more from the field or your hand or removing 5 "Forbidden One" cards with different names in your Graveyard from play."

 

 

Those are my fixes. I pulled the OCG from cards like "Ritual of Grace," "Garlandolf, King of Destruction," and "Judgment Dragon." Why? Because they have similarly worded effects. Next time, do some research. And use better pictures.