King of Yesonia Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 This is my first real post. Constructive Criticism is encouraged.Emissary of War:Grand Captain-Max Bolivar:Head of the Army:King of Yesonia:Queen of Yesonia:Log Pixie:Medical Soldier A:Medical Soldier B:Medical Soldier C:Medical Soldier D:Medical Soldier E:Medical Soldier F:Paper Infantry:Yesonian Knight:Battlefield:Fireworks:Organized Barrage:Single File:Charge at my Command:Hold Your Fire!: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xand Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 I've noticed you spelled Field wrong... you keep spelling it like this feild...and since its your first post you may not want to post so many cards at one time. Rating 11/20. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darman05 Posted May 28, 2010 Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 few OCG errors and u could have used better pic on some cards 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supabamman Posted May 29, 2010 Report Share Posted May 29, 2010 This is a great card that you could use for war and destruction Kickass Effect: This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be special summoned unless the ALCHEMY ritual card is played successfully. When this card is summoned all spell, trap, and monster cards on your opponents side of the field are destroyed automatically. This card is not affected by spell or trap cards until the Beginning of your opponents next Main Phase Two Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LourDeath Posted May 29, 2010 Report Share Posted May 29, 2010 very bad pics.... it already tires you out to check on the OCGs sorry man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touzaikokon Posted May 29, 2010 Report Share Posted May 29, 2010 You posted a LOT of cards at once. That's tough to check OCG on. But your mistakes are consistently misspellings and lack of capitalization. So I'm going to refer you to: the OCG/Grammar threadthe OCG/Grammar thread That should give you the most help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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