Divided We Fall

[yugiohplayer009]

Tell me what you think.

This card can only be equipped to a monster that is equipped with "United We Stand". at the cost of half your life points, special summon as many level 4 or below monsters from your graveyard in defense mode and switch all monsters on your side of the field except the equipped monster into defense mode (they cannot change their battle position or attack) now your opponent cannot choose to attack the equipped monster unless it is the only monster on your side of the field.When this card is destroyed, destroy the equipped monster.

[Kaosu Gakusetsu]

7.2/10

 

The image is a bad choice for it's quality and the effect jumps around alot.

[yugiohplayer009]

7.2/10

 

The image is a bad choice for it's quality and the effect jumps around alot.

eh i know the image sucks i tried to find a better one but with no luck. i also tried to find another version of the image in better quality honestly this card would be quickly made illegal.

[Skarlet]

OCG Fix, I'll get it wrong too, but I'll be able to improve the grammar.

 

This card can only be equiped to a Monster already equiped with 'United We Stand'. Pay half your Life Points. Special Summon as many level 4 or lower Monsters from your Graveyard in Defense Position, The Summoned Monsters can not change thier battle positions or attack. As long as you control more the 1 Monster, your opponent can not declare an attack on the equiped monster. When this card is destroyed. Destroy the equiped monster.

 

That's how it should be worded, or atleast closer to correctness.

 

It's kinda broken dude. I mean it's effectively a +3200 increase, and indestructability, if you can negate your opponent's S/T destruction it's rediculous. Plus, think about the deck types. Division Monarchs. Use this, Special Summon loads of monsters, tribute those for Monarchs, huge attack increases to one monster and massive field clearance, all for playing 2 equip cards.

[darman05]

You might want to add the "United we Stand" card to here

this card 5.0 /10

bad pic effect is "iffy"

[Skarlet]

You might want to add the "United we Stand" card to here

this card 5.0 /10

bad pic effect is "iffy"

 

United We Stand is a real card.

[yugiohplayer009]

You might want to add the "United we Stand" card to here

this card 5.0 /10

bad pic effect is "iffy"

 

trust me i can make way better cards than this and i have lol this is just something a threw out there and crossed my fingers i never actually expected it to get good ratings and btw the grammar thing i do my best i hardly pay attention in English class. so if i do good, i do good. if i do bad , well... i saw it coming