First Card! Pretty Neat Too :)

[Hymn]

 

What do you think?

[Gaia Overload]

Well, personally, I think it's a bit UNDERPOWERED. It HAS to attack, and when it's in defense mode it dies. It's just a forfeit card, without declaring it. Kinda like Absolute End. Give it something else, like when it attacks a monster, destroy at the end of the second turn, but you do take battle damage, along with the effect you have.

[Hymn]

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What exactly do you mean by that?

[Gaia Overload]

Add it to the effect..

[Hymn]

Add what to the effect?

 

You said "...when it attacks a monster, destroy at the end of the second turn..."

 

Destroy what at the end of the second turn? And I updated the effect a bit. I think it's more playable now.

[Gaia Overload]

oh, destroy the monster it attacks.

[touzaikokon]

It's pretty good. I think the last part should be...

 

"When this card is in Defense Position, destroy it, and inflict damage to its controller equal to half of its ATK."

 

Also, thinking about it, it should say "During your Battle Phase, if this card can attack, it must."

 

But that's about it.

 

I like the card as a whole, and it is somewhat underpowered, but still useful, imo. May want to get rid of the last effect, though, and just say that it can't be switched to DEF, except by a card effect.

 

Again, though, I like this. 8/10

[Hymn]

Ah, thanks for that first edit. I also thought about the second one, but was unsure. Are you sure that's correct?

[Hymn]

Bump it up!

[Kaosu Gakusetsu]

8.5/10

 

Only because the images has been used a bit and the effect makes it underpowered like others have stated.

[賢狼ホロ]

I wouldn't say it is exactly underpowered. Imagine having a level 4, 2000 ATK beatstick that cannot be destroyed by battle! The only downside is that if your opponent only has stronger monsters you will have to pay some life points. Level 6 monsters usually have a max of 2400 ATK = 400LP/turn/level6monster which is not too much to stall the game. Certainly better than a lot other level 4s that can be put in Defence Position.

I would like to run 3 of these in my Macro Monarch deck, so it would probably be limited... Limited cards are awesome! : D

Great card!

[Hymn]

Thanks Holo :)