Trap Card - may need some OCG help (EDIT)

[MaRcX]

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>>Continuous Breath of Fire<<

Select 1 Dragon-Type monster you control. That monster is unaffected by card effects, except this card. Once per turn, you can pay Life Points in multiples of 100 to increase the ATK of the selected monster by the amount paid. During your 3rd End Phase after this card's activation, send it to the Graveyard. -dchi [/align]

[touzaikokon]

[align=center]>>Continuous Breath of Fire<<

Select 1 Dragon-Type monster on your side of the field. This monster is protected from any Spell' date=' Trap, or Monster effects for 3 Turns. Once per turn, as long as this card is on the Field, pay in amounts of 100 Life Points to increase the ATK of the selected monster by the equal amount until the End Phase.[/b'][/align]

 

Let's see if I can't straighten this out...

 

"Select 1 Dragon-Type monster you control. That monster is unaffected by card effects, except this card. Once per turn, you can pay Life Points in multiples of 100 to increase the ATK of the selected monster by the amount paid. During your 3rd End Phase after this card's activation, send it to the Graveyard."

 

I shortened the text for the blanket protection, and fixed the LP payment text. Also, I made it so this card blows itself up after 3 turns. Because it's a Continuous Trap, the protection leaves with the card, and it cleans up the backrow. Also makes this card less OP'd, which it is. 6/10 for effort, though.

[MaRcX]

Thanks a plenty. I'll change it up.