Acrefriz Posted December 31, 2007 Report Share Posted December 31, 2007 Hi y'all,I'm fairly new to the card designing idea, but when I started on my long-running fan fiction, I had to create this card.Magic Matrix may be too powerful to be a 'realistic card' but it is used with a deck of charmers and machines. This is my first custom card so spare me some harsh judgements. [attachment=18386] There are only three more cards I have to create for my fan-fiction. A final custom card - Chthonian Planet, then Results of the Alchemic Research and Winged Kuriboh Lv9. The last two are in the manga but I need better images of them.Many thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 31, 2007 Report Share Posted December 31, 2007 I can see the idea behind this, but it needs alot of work. When you fuse two monsters, I'm pretty sure they need to be specific cards, not just a type. You also have some grammar, punctuation, and capitalization errors. Good job though! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Acrefriz Posted December 31, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2007 I changed Magic Matrix from a fusion monster to an effect monster. There are some very powerful flip effects out there so I had to make it difficult to summon. It may no longer be a fusion monster but it will still take a few cards to summon it! [attachment=18387] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted December 31, 2007 Report Share Posted December 31, 2007 The Effect Monster is rubbish, the Fusion Monster is excellent. 9.4/10 for the Fusion.PS. Special Summon needs to be written "Special Summon".PPS. Glasstin10, they can be a type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Acrefriz Posted December 31, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2007 If I can have a fusion monster with no specific fusion material monsters, I'll keep it as as a fusion monster.I've spent the better part of a year reading these cards yet I cannot quite get the grammer right. On the fusion version, what corrections need to be made to the grammer? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted December 31, 2007 Report Share Posted December 31, 2007 That's not that bad of a card, If this card was real, I'd allow in the tourny's I host Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(!Death!Reborn!) Posted December 31, 2007 Report Share Posted December 31, 2007 Uh,ok 5/10 :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Acrefriz Posted January 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2008 EDIT: Chthonian Planet updated. Just so I don't waste forum space, I'll upload my other cards here. [attachment=18534]Like a real Chthonian planet, nothing massive can exist in it without being destroyed. [attachment=18472]As for Results of the Alchemic Research, the image was taken out of the manga, if anyone has better pictures for this card and Winged Kuriboh LV9, they'd be much appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted January 1, 2008 Report Share Posted January 1, 2008 -Summoned-Special Summoned-Level-Decks-Spell Cards-Graveyard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted January 2, 2008 Report Share Posted January 2, 2008 Grammar problems, good pic, good. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seligsalt Posted January 2, 2008 Report Share Posted January 2, 2008 OCG needs work and great idea for an effect Ill give you a 25/25.1 o.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 2, 2008 Report Share Posted January 2, 2008 5/10 C_:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seligsalt Posted January 2, 2008 Report Share Posted January 2, 2008 these would make really good cards in RL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eXp3rT Posted January 4, 2008 Report Share Posted January 4, 2008 7/10 its good u know what Matrix is... ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kobekid Posted January 5, 2008 Report Share Posted January 5, 2008 nice card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark_magician_girl Posted January 5, 2008 Report Share Posted January 5, 2008 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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