kevin7653 Posted May 29, 2010 Report Share Posted May 29, 2010 This is my newest card I had to alternate the effect because of previous bad posts:(.But I hope you guys like this one.Pay 1000 life points to play this card.The monster equipped with this card has its ATK doubled.Pay 500 life points in your standby phase to keep this card on the field. Please Comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Apocryphal Posted May 29, 2010 Report Share Posted May 29, 2010 The picture is pretty decent, 8/10."Pay 1000 life points to play this card.The monster equipped with this card has its ATK doubled.Pay 500 life points in your standby phase to keep this card on the field." It should say: "Pay 1000 Life Points...""Any monster equipped...""Pay 500 Life Points...""during your Standby Phase..." I don't see anything else.. But pretty good card overall. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaia Overload Posted May 29, 2010 Report Share Posted May 29, 2010 Pretty good, just need some spaces. Pic is Halo, and i don'tah likea thata too mucha. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted May 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2010 Thanks for good complainants guys and to qm9a7 I dont care the grammar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeXodus Posted May 29, 2010 Report Share Posted May 29, 2010 I believe in constructive critism! And my critism to this card is... 1. OCG needs to be fixed.2. Crop and find a better image for this one is Pop Cultural.3. Spaces are mandatory. It's ok. Needs a bit of work but overall, it's a 6/10.MASTUR CHEIF! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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