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ParaToxic Posted May 30, 2010 Report Share Posted May 30, 2010 Lots of OCG errors, but lets put that aside for now...DH - Dragoon:A way too OP effect with no drawback. Lets say that u've got Dreadmaster or Dogma or any other monster with 3000+ atk points. If you get a "Head" you can attack directly, and if u don't he discards a card from his deck.I would change that effect to this one:Heads - Select 1 Monster on your field. The selected Monster can attack your opponent directly. Only the selected Monster can attack this turn.Tails - Destroy 1 Monster on your side of the field with the highest Attack. Future Destiny: That picture was taken from Emergency Teleport, but aside of that its eff is OP. Remove from play 2 monsters? Cmon... Balance it out a bit Total score: 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Apocryphal Posted May 30, 2010 Report Share Posted May 30, 2010 Pics- 7/10Effects-7/10 (I'm still wondering about them, though...)OCG- OMG. I found at least 11 mistakes. (14/30) Work a little more on these, don't worry, you'll get better. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zazuzila Posted May 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2010 What are OCG errors? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Apocryphal Posted May 30, 2010 Report Share Posted May 30, 2010 O=OfficialC=CardG=Grammar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParaToxic Posted May 30, 2010 Report Share Posted May 30, 2010 http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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