Destiny's Prevail (just a card I made :P)

[draining12]

 

Hey everyone, I just thought it's a cool idea :D.

 

Description : Eliminate all your life points except 1 to activate this effect. Increase this monster's attack by 1000 per every 1000 life points your opponent has lost or/and loses. This monster's attack does not increase in portions, only by 1000. Trap cards have no effect on this monster if the attack is over 3000. Your opponent also loses 500 life points per every turn this card is face-up in attack position.

 

Thanks for viewing it :)

[NeXodus]

That right there, is what I call... Bad OCG. I'm sorry but I don't feel like correcting it so someone else can. :D

 

That is some blurry picture you got there buddy.

 

EDIT: No 1 DEF. That is not allowed sir and I am very annoyed. Annoyed doesn't look right to me... That's how you spell it, right?

[ChaosIncarn]

Zero you lazy bastard....I'm not doing it either. [Also a lazy bastard]

 

Anyway, yeah, VERY blurry image, and the effect hardly makes sense with the OCG the way it is.

[draining12]

Eh sorry, =| and yeah thats how annoyed is spelled XD

[NeXodus]

I know, I am a lazy bastard. BUT the effect is really long and it has alot of errors.

[draining12]

typo errors or just crappy effect? XD

[NeXodus]

Well... allow me to read the effect...

 

 

Both.

[Ghoulish]

Eliminate all your life points except 1 to activate this effect. Increase this monster's attack by 1000 per every 1000 life points your opponent has lost or/and loses. This monster's attack does not increase in portions, only by 1000. Trap cards have no effect on this monster if the attack is over 3000. Your opponent also loses 500 life points per every turn this card is face-up in attack position"

 

Correct i think: " When this card is Summoned, inflict damage to your opponent in multiples of 1000, (the multiples must be 1000, this effect cannot reduce your opponent's Life Points to 0). For each 1000 Life Points inflicted by this effect, add 1 Prevail Counter to this card. By removing any number of Prevail Counters from this card, this card gains 1000 ATK. If this card's ATK is over 3000, this card is unaffected by Trap Cards. You must pay 500 Life Points during each of your Standby Phases while you control this face-up card, if you cannot then destroy this card."

 

Where do i start? oeriginal but not in a good wa, to easy to sumon and with such a devastating effect, i got rid of the last efefct because, really? u summont his your opponent has at the most 1000 Life Points, so instead i put u pay them to add a s adraw back, also make this cards atka nd def 0, thta isnt an opinion either, its what it should be. Alos the pic, its already a card pic called Darkness Destroyer, which is in fact a mad card, ur new however i understand u tried, and overall was different to waht new people often make, i do like the name howver it seems to sort of suit more of a spell or trap card, maybe change it to " Destiny's Avenger" or summfin. Overalk just need to mak ethose improvements really.

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also very very very avbusable with dark room of nightmare, didnt think of that

[NeXodus]

Thank you for correcting the OCG so I don't have to Maadd!

[Ghoulish]

haha no worries man, was a real struggle to do lol