kosmos7500 Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 This is my first trap card. I think this is O.K. but i am not sure. Please tell me your opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 There are no Quick Play Traps. It's effect is exactly the same as Magical Arm Shield.Name is ok, but it's pic is bad. Please note that cards need to be original, so please make your next cards with more originality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hass Mac Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 Oped(Overpowered)You should make it a different effect, like one that balances it out, with advantages and disadvantagesdont take it personally ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kosmos7500 Posted May 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 Don't worry i won't? I am new and i need to learn more. Every critique is welcome.What do you think about this cards: Is that original enough besides that i had a little inspiration from the Disney Charaters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LourDeath Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 OCG wrong Activate this card when your opponent declares an attack. Negate the attack of 1 monster and inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the ATK of that monster. After this card resolves, gain control of that monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamesgent111 Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 overpowered you cant permanently take over an opponents monster, kill that affect, and replace whole thing with thise "When your opponent declares an Attack, Negate the Attack and Inflict damage equal to the attacking monster to your opponents Life Points." very similar to magic cylinder, oh and no such thing as quick play trap just leave it as a plain trap, if you do those things itsa 9.6/10, at the moment however it is only a 4.2/10 :P good luck and nice try for a first cardoh and lourdeath your effect makes absolutley no sense... read the ocg forum, not just lourdeath kosmos you could gain a little knowledge from there, lourdeath you should know ocg by the time your a 4 star user... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kosmos7500 Posted May 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 What do you think about this. I have changed the OCG and the Quick-Play Trap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card_Critic24 Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 The picture just looks like a bar fight, the OCG is so wrong, and the card is just Op'd in general.You need to balance out the effect a bit more and (sorry to get off subject) you spelled "Phantom" wrong in your sig. Fantom = Phantom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kosmos7500 Posted June 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 About the picture, i have download it from the internet. It was the best I could find. And abot the grammar, I live in a contry where we write the words down as we spell them. I live i bosnia and hezegowina. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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