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Why you posted the same card 6 Times ..? and the OCG Sucks a lot it will be something like :

Increase the ATK of this card equal to the number of ``Valkirye`` monsters in your Graveyard . By paying 500 Life Points this card can Attack Directly .

 

and it is Very Op , sorry but -1/10

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i unlike some people (looks at comments above) am not going to rip this card apart. it is a very nice card but has a few errors.

1. with an attack/defense like that 6-8 stars would be more accurate.

2. The effect should be more like this " For every card with "Valkiria" in your graveyard increase the attack of this card by 100"

3. There is no need to post 2 different languages on the same card, if you want it to be read in a different language make an entirely new card entirely in that language.

 

It is obvious you like this card (hense the 6x post) and with those changes this card would be even better. for now I'll give this card a 4/10.

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well if this card maker is spanish than here

 

1. con un ataque / defensa como el 6-8 estrellas sería más exacto.

2. El efecto debería ser más como éste "Por cada tarjeta con" Valkiria "en el cementerio de aumentar el ataque de esta tarjeta por el 100"

3. No hay necesidad de enviar dos idiomas diferentes en la misma tarjeta, si usted quiere que sea leído en un idioma diferente hacer una tarjeta totalmente nuevo en su totalidad en ese idioma.

 

Es obvio que como esta tarjeta (Hense el puesto 6x) y con los cambios de esta tarjeta sería aún mejor. por ahora voy a dar esta tarjeta un 4 / 10

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