~Umbreon~ Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 This is my first card. Rate it plz and also give me advice. (Pic off of google!) Thank you! -Cudge Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wolfman505 Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 Description - A fierce warrior from the Fudel age of Japan. An honorable and noble warrior in his lineage. He specializes in close combat and ninjustsu. Overrall right now 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sepulchure Lord Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 REALLY GOOD... 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 set-id is wrong (32642-34567)...try SMT-EN001try to create Effect Monsters..7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Umbreon~ Posted May 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 Sorry, I just hate effect monsters because I can't think of any effects, I don't want to go copying somebody elses effect. If you know one, please tell me! And thanks for the advice Giovanny! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wolfman505 Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 Check out my threads i dont mind, you might get some ideas from it. Look in clubs sig. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 Try this effect:Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower monster with 1300 ATK or less from your Deck. Then the Deck is suffled. It's so easy!! you must learn about OCG (Official Card Grammar). Check real card's OCG!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Umbreon~ Posted May 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 Erm is this a good one? Like the effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StichedBloodAlpha Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 That sounds like a good effect, but you should take out the description since effect monsters don't have a description of themselves, they just list their effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Umbreon~ Posted May 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 Oh yeah, I just scrolled through my cards, shoot let me change that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 Take out the description !! correction:This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for every Warrior-Type monster on your opponent's side of the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BDB vi Britannia Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 "Each time a Warrior monster is Summoned, increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 300." with no card description =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Umbreon~ Posted June 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 Switched it now gotta upload it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
823=chan Posted June 1, 2010 Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 Geez, man, really bad for a level 5 monster but good try. 3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Umbreon~ Posted June 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 Thanks for the good try ROFL. Okay, hopefully this is the last time I upload it... -crosses fingers- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted June 1, 2010 Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 hmmm one more thing....your tiger is a beast...but he is a warrior...so change the Warrior/Effect to Beast-Warrior/Effect..then chance the effect to: This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for every Beast-Warrior or Warrior-Type monster on your opponent's side of the field. 10/10 with that change! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Umbreon~ Posted June 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 ooops I didn't read the beast warrior effect thingy. BACK TO EDITING XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fakecardmaker222 Posted June 1, 2010 Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 Well it's your first work, but it would be excellent after little editing.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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