Kevin X Dragon Posted June 1, 2010 Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 This in BETA Phase II.I am trying to make this deck balanced so I can use it in real life. [spoiler=Monsters][spoiler= Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 "God" monsters. This card is unaffected by effects of Monster and Trap Cards. This card gains 500 ATK for every "God" monster on the field and in the Graveyard. [spoiler= Lore]This monster gains 500 DEF for each face-up "God" monster on the field. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent cannot select another monster as an attack target. [spoiler= Lore]This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard by discarding 1 Spell or Trap Card from your hand. [spoiler= Lore]During your Battle Phase, if you control another "God" monster, you can negate the effect of 1 Trap Card. [spoiler= Lore]This card is unaffected by Spell and Trap Cards. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you may discard 1 Monster Card from your hand to select 1 Spell or Trap Card from your Graveyard and add it to your hand. [spoiler= Lore]This card can attack twice during the Battle Phase. [spoiler= Lore]During your opponent’s Standby Phase, inflict 200 damage for every face-up monster you control. [spoiler= Lore]Control of this card cannot switch. If you control another monster, this card cannot be destroyed. Once per turn, you can take control of 1 monster the opponent controls by paying 1000 Life Points. [spoiler= Lore]During your Standby Phase, by sending this face-up card to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "God Ambrose" from your hand or Deck. [spoiler= Lore]During your Standby Phase, by sending this face-up card to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "God Aphrodite" from your hand or Deck. [spoiler= Lore]During your Standby Phase, by sending this face-up card to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "God Gwydion" from your hand or Deck. [spoiler= Lore]This card gains 1000 ATK and Def for every “Warrior Of The Gods” you control, excluding this card. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 “Warrior Of The Gods” from your hand or Deck. [spoiler=Spells][spoiler= Lore]During your opponent's End Phase you can Special Summon 1 "Servant" monster from your hand. Send 1 card from your hand to the bottom of your Deck during your End Phase. If you do not, destroy this card. [spoiler= Lore]Select 1 monster in your Graveyard. Special Summon the selected monster in the same battle position it was when destroyed. [spoiler= Lore]Active only when you control "God Ambrose". Once per turn, by sending 1 monster you control to the Graveyard or discarding 1 Monster Card from your hand, send one monster the opponent controls to the Graveyard. [spoiler= Lore]"God" monsters gain 300 ATK and DEF as long as this card remains face-up on the field. When a "God" monster is destroyed by battle, Special Summon the monster back to your field in ATK or DEF position during your next Standby Phase. [spoiler= Lore]Place 2 "God Tokens" (Warrior/DARK/1 Star/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Defense Position on your side of the field. This tokens can be used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon [spoiler= Lore]Activate only when you have 2000 or less Life Points. Special Summon up to 3 monsters with 2000 ATK or less from your Graveyard. [spoiler= Lore]Activate only when you have no cards in your hand. Add 2 monsters, 1 Spell, and 1 Trap card from your Deck to your hand. [spoiler= Lore]The monster equipped with this card gains 300 ATK for every "God" monster in your Graveyard. [spoiler=Traps][spoiler= Lore]Select 1 monster from your Graveyard and Special Summon it. If the Special Summoned monster has 2500 or more ATK, it is destroyed during your End Phase. [spoiler= Lore]Activate this effect only when you control a "God" monster; Once per turn, you can negate the effect of a Spell Card by discarding 1 card from you hand. [spoiler= Lore]Negate all attacks from the opponent until the End Phase. While you control 1 "God" monster, if this card is in your Graveyard, you can remove it from play. If you activate this effect, add it to your hand during your Second Standby Phase after activation. [spoiler= Lore]When a "God" monster is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 2 Level 4 monsters from your Graveyard. These monsters cannot be Tribute. [spoiler= Lore]Activate this card only when your opponent declares an attack with a monster that has 2000 or more ATK. Your opponent selects 2 random cards in your hand. If it is a Monster Card, Special Summon it to your side of the field. If one of the cards is not a Monster Card send that card to the Graveyard. [spoiler= Lore]Activate only when an opponent's monster declares an attack. Negative the attack and destroy the attacking monster. If there is any OCG mistake in the cards please tell me (I would be very thankful if you also tell me how to fix it or fix it for me). Also if you feel like if any of the cards are overpowered or underpowered tell me why and I will try my best fix it. Image CreditHP DoomFather WolfAlcanderWanderley-DG-Many artiest from DeviantArt If I used one of your images please PM and I will put your name on the list. Special Thanks ToBDB vi Britannia: For helping me fix OCG.redrage1993: For helping me fix OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lolwhy Posted June 1, 2010 Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 Monsters 8/10.-Nice pics.-Some Lore typos. Spells 9/10.-Very nice pics and good effects. Traps 10/10-The artwork amazes me. Very nice artwork and effects. Other than that a few errors/typos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin X Dragon Posted June 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 Monsters 8/10.-Nice pics.-Some Lore typos. Spells 9/10.-Very nice pics and good effects. Traps 10/10-The artwork amazes me. Very nice artwork and effects. Other than that a few errors/typos. Thank you for the feedback. :D Can you tell where I made the errors/typos? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Umbreon~ Posted June 1, 2010 Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 You accidentally made a trap Guardian Angle instead of Angel :) Very nice, I love the guardian angel card the best for it's pic XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted June 1, 2010 Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Metallium Posted June 1, 2010 Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 Dude this deck is awesome but the god of all gods looks like BAHAMUT ZERO. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin X Dragon Posted June 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 You accidentally made a trap Guardian Angle instead of Angel :) Very nice' date=' I love the guardian angel card the best for it's pic XD[/quote'] :oops: Thank you, I fix it. 8/10 How can I make this deck be 9/10 or 10/10? Dude this deck is awesome but the god of all gods looks like BAHAMUT ZERO. 8.5/10 I do not know what Bahamut Zero is or how it looks but I spend a day looking for the perfect image for God of Gods and the one I have is the closest thing to perfect. If you know a better image for the card please tell me and I may replace it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wardek Posted June 1, 2010 Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 Nice cards, where did you get these images? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin X Dragon Posted June 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 Thank you. I got the images from HP Doom, Father Wolf, Alcander, Wanderley, and -DG-. All them have topic full of images. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wardek Posted June 1, 2010 Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 Thanks, i'll try one of them later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin X Dragon Posted June 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 I forget about DeviantArt. There are some good looking images in DeviantArt but you may have to edit some of them because there too large. Anyone else want to give me some feedback? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wardek Posted June 1, 2010 Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 I know dA, its hard to find atleast a good picture for my card. Im making a card about a Dark World. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin X Dragon Posted June 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 Good luck with that. :) Any more feedback? Any feedback will help a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin X Dragon Posted June 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2010 [bump]I could use some more feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redrage1993 Posted June 2, 2010 Report Share Posted June 2, 2010 9/10Here are my suggested text for each monster card that appeared to include errors (may still include some errors) God of Gods:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 monsters. This card cannot be targeted and is unaffected by the effects of Monster and Trap Cards. This card gains 500 ATK for every "God" on the field and in the Graveyard. God Alexander:As long as this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent cannot select another "God" monster as an attack target. God Andreas:During your Battle Phase, if you control another "God" monster, you can negate the effect of 1 Trap Card. God Gwydion:This card is unaffected by Spell/Trap Cards. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you may discard 1 Monster Card from your hand to select 1 Spell/Trap Card from your Graveyard and add it to your hand. God Hector:This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. God Pyralis:During your opponent’s Standby Phase, inflict 200 damage for every face-up monster you control. All of the "Servant"s:During your Standby Phase, Special Summon 1 ______ from your hand or Deck by sending this face-up card to the Graveyard. Warrior of the Gods:This card gains 1000 ATK and Def for each “Warrior Of The Gods” you control (excluding this card). When this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 “Warrior Of The Gods” from your hand or Deck. These may, and probably do, have some errors in them.Yes, I have too much free time.Edit: I fixed the "negative" error on Andreas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin X Dragon Posted June 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2010 Thank you for helping me fixes the OCG. I have changed most of them with a little editing from me. To show my gratitude I have added your name to list of people that helped me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LourDeath Posted June 3, 2010 Report Share Posted June 3, 2010 i recall the same pics in another thread and was in the same order as how they are arranged here... pics are overused Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin X Dragon Posted June 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2010 I have just fixed some small mistakes. @LourDeath Can you post the link to that topic? I seen 2 or 4 cards that have one of the images I use but I have not seen someone using all the images I unused. Unless someone is willing to make me unique images for my card that I only have the right to use or find better images for my cards, I am going to keep those pictures. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redrage1993 Posted June 4, 2010 Report Share Posted June 4, 2010 I suggest that you change The Servant of Aphrodite's and The Servant of Gwydion's card text to the format similar to The Servant of Ambrose's card text. Suggested Format:During your Standby Phase, Special Summon 1 "God ______" from your hand or Deck by sending this face-up card to the Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin X Dragon Posted June 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2010 I changed but forgot to update the images. Images updated and fixed errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin X Dragon Posted June 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 I am almost ready to print this out and test them. Is there any changes I should make before I print them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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