Awesome Effect that Needs Some OCG Help

[Hymn]

Check this out:

 

 

Here's the lore, let me know if there's anything I can do to make it more simple and clear, while still maintaining a professional air.

 

[spoiler=Effect]During your opponent's Standby Phase, select a card in their hand. Your opponent then rolls a six-sided die. If the result is 1 or 6, the selected card is sent to the Graveyard. If the result is not 1 or 6, your opponent draws cards from his/her Deck equal to the number rolled. During the End Phase of your opponent's turn, he/she must discard the same number of cards that he/she drew during his/her Standby Phase.

 

 

 

Also, what do you guys think about the card itself? It's the first of many in a set I'm making involving more Astral Titan Monsters.

 

Image credit to MF Doom.

[Hymn]

:( nobody has a comment? Come on!

[:ABC:]

the card is fine, the image is good and the effect is good 7/10

[LourDeath]

During your opponent's Standby Phase, select a card in his/her hand. Your opponent then rolls a six-sided die. If the result is 1 or 6, the selected card is sent to the Graveyard. If not, your opponent draws card/s from his/her Deck equal to the result. During the End Phase of your opponent's turn, he/she must discard the same number of cards that he/she drew during his/her Standby Phase.

[Hymn]

Ah. Thanks LourDeath :)

 

What did you think of the card itself though?

[LourDeath]

Ah. Thanks LourDeath :)

 

What did you think of the card itself though?

 

oh yeah... i'm sorry....

 

pic is monstrous!!!!

9/10

 

but you see... the effects is so powerful for some Level 3 monster

 

i only read the OCG and only noticed now that this is only level 3

maybe make it a level 5

 

^.^

[Ghoulish]

not bad, but defiantly change the type as it does not really fall into the psychic category. effect is pretty original, would i say heaps original? probs not but still a nice pic, names good, dotn know if it would be thnat useful of a card though, need to see the rest of thes et really, but not bad

[Clair]

I lol'd at all the comments above.

 

Ew. I never was a really big fan of chance cards, but this thing seems pretty balanced. 1 or 6? Hand loss for your opponent, which could be huge. However, methinks that the last part of the effect makes it a bit OP'd. This thing is a Deck-milling monster. But it also allows for huge hand advantage. I like it. ^^

 

Pssst... what happens if they don't have enough cards in their hand to discard at the End Phase?

 

PARADOX.

[Hymn]

Pssst... what happens if they don't have enough cards in their hand to discard at the End Phase?

 

THEY LOSE THE DUEL. :lol:

 

JK, IDK probably just discard their entire hand then =/. Should I add a clause stating that if they can't discard that number of cards that they have to skip their next draw phase or something?

 

Yeah it does mill like nobody's business, but if your opponent gets to draw 5 cards from that roll alone, that's like an entire starting hand in one turn, which could result in HUGE plays. That's why I think it's not too overpowered, but it'd probably be limited I'd guess.

[Hymn]

Bump yo