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lore:This warrior can not be thrown by a magic or trap card can only be pulled sacrificing

-Gains 500 atk points for every warrior type monster in the cemetery

-With this card you pay points you want and life is a warrior type monster in your graveyard and this card gains maso which you confided to send the letter to the cemetery

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Everything is terrible.

 

"Valkyria" is not a Type. Change it to "Fairy" or something. >_>

Your OCG needs work. Look at an actual Yu-Gi-Oh! card for reference.

The lore doesn't match the effect on the card.

Pixelated picture.

 

Know at least some OCG before you post, please.

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LOL! What a fail. Change type to Warrior or Spell-caster or Fairy. Also' date=' bet you never even began to think to read the OCG of Yugioh! or even put effort into this. Picture isn't all that great too.

 

Score: 10/10

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Your criticism contradicts your rate. >_>

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LOL! What a fail. Change type to Warrior or Spell-caster or Fairy. Also' date=' bet you never even began to think to read the OCG of Yugioh! or even put effort into this. Picture isn't all that great too.

 

Score: 10/10

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This is the best quote ever. xD

 

Frankly this has no effort put into it, absolutely no good OCG, and you have capitalizing and punctuation problems.

 

Score: 10 2/10

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