This is my new way to write ocg (i use to write pretty bad)

[jeal1995]

Well if you think this card OCG is bad please don't look my others cards OCG those are very bad.

 

 

The name was inspired on Dark Magician Girl cause is almost the same i finded this photo on photobucket.

 

 

Maybe the name isn't so good but i couldn't think other one.

 

 

I really like this card I think is kind of cool

 

 

I put that name cause is pretty white.

 

Well I hope you like my new OCG if you don't tell wat I need to make betters OCG.

[LourDeath]

Select a monster. For every FIRE monster on the field, decrease the ATK of the selected monster by 300.

 

All face-up monsters on the field is treated as Zombie-Type monster and increase their ATK by 500.

 

When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, your opponent can't declare an attack for 3 turns.

 

All face-up Zombie-Type monsters gain 300 ATK for every Zombie-Type monsters in your Graveyard.

 

 

2nd card would be useless.... you make all face-up cards zombie-type, that means making your opponent monster cards also zombie-type monsters.... plus giving them an increase in the ATK

[jeal1995]

Maybe you think Zombie infection is bad but there are many ways that this cards can help you in a duel

 

1) Lets say that you have a card that the effect is : For every Zombie type monster on the field you gain 500 life points. That will really help well that my opinion.

2)For every zombie type monster on the field you inflict 300 damage to your opponent.That another way that this card help.I will say before saying a card is bad look all the ways that the card can help you, and mayb you dont like it but other people does.

[LourDeath]

Maybe you think Zombie infection is bad but there are many ways that this cards can help you in a duel

 

1) Lets say that you have a card that the effect is : For every Zombie type monster on the field you gain 500 life points. That will really help well that my opinion.

2)For every zombie type monster on the field you inflict 300 damage to your opponent.That another way that this card help.I will say before saying a card is bad look all the ways that the card can help you' date=' and mayb you dont like it but other people does.

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you don't say "lets say" (by the way it's Let's say)

show the card that has that effect so people wont get the same idea as i had

 

if i know an existing card with that effect, why would i comment that way?

get it??

 

show the other cards so people would say that they "support" each other

[Ghoulish]

ok the effects arent original, and to bland IMO. Nothing really special. I may be ablee to help u with the ocg a bit

1st card) Select 1 monster your opponent controls, as long as you control this face-up card, the selected monster loses 300 ATK for every FIRE monster you control.

2nd card) All monsters on the field are treated as Zombie-Type monsters. All Zombie-Type monsters gain 500 ATK.

3rd card) When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, your opponent cannot conduct their Battle Phase for their next 3 turns.

4th card) FLIP: As long as you control this face-up card, all monsters you control gain 300 ATK for every Zombie-Type monster in your Graveyard.

 

Okay here are spome ocg pointers:

Capatralize words like "Graveyard", "Deck", "Attack Position", "Defence Position".(theese are only a few)

When discribing types of monsters, always capitalize and add "-" eg: zombie type = Zombie-Type

When saying a pleyrs side of the field dont say "select a monster on your side of the field, say "Select 1 monster you control".

Never say "ATK or DEF ""Points"" always just Increase their ATK or DEF by 300.

Also when inflicting damage to an opponent's Life Points say it like this "Inflict 500 damage to your opponent". (dont even meantion your opponents Life Points, unless soemthing like your opponent pays half their Life Points.)

 

as for the cards,

card 1 - not original not heaps useful, not very original, very plain effect try to come up with an original effect,

card 2 - Not to bad, but again nothing special, not heaps useful

card 3 - Opd, 3 turns is a long long time, tone down the effect, pic is okay, but cxhange the name as their already is a zombie dragon.

card 4 - very unreliable, theres a good chance u wont be able to even flip it up, bnot worth the tribute.

 

Overall not very good, but not horrible for a new member, just try to look at different effects to come upw ith things to exploit oint hese effects, eg Life Poitns, card destruction, card removal, drawing cards, sepecial summoning, diiscarding cards, tokens theres a long list of what u can choose from. Also -

"I will say before saying a card is bad look all the ways that the card can help you" (fair enough),

"and mayb you dont like it but other people does. " (okay totally unneeded if u dont want critisicm then dont post cards its as simple as that)