My first card in my elementals deck

[Iceydude168]

Cold Flame

 

 

Please rate, don't just say it sucks or it's good

 

Effect:

 

"This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned by removing from play one FIRE attribute card and one WATER attribute card. This card can attack the turn it is summoned. When this card is sent to the graveyard as a result of battle, the controller takes 500 points of direct damage to their life points."

 

I hope OCG is ok, please correct if it is wrong

 

(Yes, this picture is my avatar- I thought it looked kinda cool)

[Clair]

The OCG is wrong. But I don't care about OCG, as long as I can understand the effect.

 

This thing is like a CED, except with FIRE and WATER monsters instead of LIGHT or DARK monsters. Except this thing is less useful than CED (Chaos Emperor Dragon).

 

Let me point some things out.

 

This card can only be special summoned by removing from play one FIRE attribute card and one WATER attribute card.

 

... from where? I assume you meant Graveyard?

 

This card can attack the turn it is summoned.

 

Why have this here? Any card can attack the turn it is Summoned. >_>

 

When this card is sent to the graveyard as a result of battle, the controller takes 500 points of direct damage to their life points.

 

Ew. 500 points is a nuisance. Especially in the kind of Deck that would run this card.

 

What I see here is a solid beatstick with no S/T protection and a little burn drawback. However, the huge drawback is the FIRE/WATER removal requirement. I've never seen decks run FIRE and WATER monsters together.

 

But that's just me.

 

Oh, and Elemental isn't a proper type. ;D

[Iceydude168]

Thanx for your feedback :D. Changed effect will be: "This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned by removing from play one FIRE attribute monster and one WATER attribute monster from your side of the field. This card cannot be affected by spell and trap cards for three turns after it is summoned. When this card is sent to the graveyard as a result of battle, the controller takes 500 points of direct damage to their life points."

Yeah, I know elemental isn't a real type. Neither is Ghost (in my sig) But where's the fun in that?