Ghost Elemental Card

[Iceydude168]

Here it is

 

 

I'm wondering if it is overpowered, also fix the OCG please.

[FriendlyHost]

really horrible images, bad ocg, uncreative. i give you 5/10 but keep trying! not too bad... please dont be offended

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try finding better images as well as more original effects and you will be a much better card maker

[TechnoDoomedOne]

OCG isn't bad, just some erros. Using the old lores doesn't mean that the OCG is bad neither.

 

@Iceydude168: I don't think the 1st card is OP'd (overpowered), but I think the 2nd really is. You know, 3000 attackers are not so common, and neither they should have a good effect. As for the artwork, it could be better, so I am giving you a 7/10. You can improve, and I am saying this as a constructive critic.

 

As for the OCG fixes (uses shortcuts and expert OCG):

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 DARK monster and 1 EARTH monster in your Graveyard from play. When this card is Summoned, inflict 500 damage to your opponent.

(normally cards that remove from play from your grave say: remove ...... in your graveyard from play; i don't think your OCG in that was wrong, but just in case)

 

The other monster has no OCG flows, except using the old OCG. You can shorten that text.

[Iceydude168]

The second card is in my sig (note the dividing line), and it is meant to be overpowered, I never really meant it to be balanced. Sorry for the confusion, and I will fix the OCG. Thanks for the feedback.:)

[mike_destrall]

nothing special... plus the fake types... the cards are supposed to be realistic...but not bad at all lets say 6.5/10...

[Zextra]

Not bad, but make the effect more interesting and original.

 

keep trying, 6.5/10