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[cryptidhunter41]

[Mothball]

Alright, small set, my bandwith can deal with this.

 

First you want to capitilize the first letter of the names and types, so Zekrom, Zoroak and Beast-Warrior.

 

OCG wise s'okay, missed a few Capitols and there are a few mistakes but not too bad otherwise. To sick to do it myself, sorry.

 

The Pictures, you want to find better pictures go to Deviant Art and search for some. There'll be much better ones than the stock images you've got.

 

For a 1st post, not bad. 6/10.

[NeosWiseman]

Alright' date=' small set, my bandwith can deal with this.

 

First you want to capitilize the first letter of the names and types, so [b']Z[/b]ekrom, Zoroak and Beast-Warrior.

 

OCG wise s'okay, missed a few Capitols and there are a few mistakes but not too bad otherwise. To sick to do it myself, sorry.

 

The Pictures, you want to find better pictures go to Deviant Art and search for some. There'll be much better ones than the stock images you've got.

 

For a 1st post, not bad. 6/10.

Well then, seems I'll be doing the OCG check this time (anytime :D)

Reshiram: This card gains 100 ATK for every monster in the Graveyard. When this card is Summoned destroy 1 face-up Continuous Trap Card on your opponent's field.

 

Zerkom: When this card is Special Summoned, destroy 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's field. If your opponent has no Spell or Trap cards on the field, this monster can attack him/her directly.

 

Zoroack: Discard 1 card from your hand to negate the attack of 1 monster your opponent controls.

 

Zorua: During your 2nd Standby Phase after this card is Summoned, you can Tribute this card to Special Summon "Zoroack" from your hand or Deck.

 

For first cards, these effects are pretty descent. You should work on the OCG quite much though, but that's OK. Everybody starts with that. Here is a link for you. Here you can read the main characteristics of the Official Card Grammar. Good luck and welcome to Yu-Gi-Oh Card Maker! :D

 

 

 

EDIT: Ooops! Forgot to tell you one more thing. You should lower the level of the first 2 cards to 9, there are too many stars :?. And Zoroack's Level should be like 7 or 8 (9 seems too high for his stats).