unHappy Clown Zombie

[-Mert-]

 

This monster can only be Ritual summoned with the Ritual spell card "Clown Ritual".You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand.As long as this card remains face up on the field,the ATK and DEF of ZOMBIE-Type monsters continues to increase each of your Standby Phases.This effect continues until your 4th turn after the card is activated.

 

 

 

This card used to Tirual Summon "unHappy Clown Zombie". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand.

[Stan Alda]

These are not bad cards, but you made one major mistake; you forgot to put by how much your Zombies' ATK and DEF increase.

 

As for minor errors:

In "Clown Ritual", you wrote "Tirual Summon".

Put spaces after periods when typing complete sentences.

 

Otherwise, they're a decent pair of cards; it seems like a Ritual version of "Pumpking the King of Ghosts", albeit more useful in that you don't need "Castle of Dark Illusions". I'll give this a 7.3/10.