Anbu-of-Sand Posted June 4, 2010 Report Share Posted June 4, 2010 [align=center]Lore:Each time a Spell Card is activated, place 1 Spell Counter on this card (max.3) Once per turn, when your opponent activates a card or card effect that targets 1 or more cards on your side of the field, you can remove 1 Spell Counter from this card and discard 1 card to negate and destroy that card. Image Credit To: Jazin Kay[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dxjxc Posted June 5, 2010 Report Share Posted June 5, 2010 Not bad. OCG looks good, but sentences can be merged.Like so:...you can discard 1 card and remove 1 Spell Counter from this card to negate the effect and destroy the card. But I don't think discarding is necessary, unless you want it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted June 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2010 I felt like it needed some sort of drawback to it so...xPPlus the discarding can be used together with the other 2 Mysterious Magicians I made.If you discard a monster, you can Special Summon it with Mysterious Magician of Soul Searcher.If you have Mysterious Magician of Card Control, the discard won't be that bad as a drawback with the draw power from Card Control's effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dxjxc Posted June 5, 2010 Report Share Posted June 5, 2010 Sounds good. Are you going to make changes to card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted June 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2010 Probably not to this card until someone gives me a reason how it can be used in some broken way. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dxjxc Posted June 5, 2010 Report Share Posted June 5, 2010 The changes I made were to the wording, not the actual effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touzaikokon Posted June 5, 2010 Report Share Posted June 5, 2010 Each time a Spell Card is activated' date=' place 1 Spell Counter on this card (max. 3). Once per turn, when your opponent activates a card that targets 1 or more cards on your side of the field, you can remove 1 Spell Counter from this card to negate the card effect and destroy the card. Discard 1 card every time you use this effect.[/quote'] Effect: Sounds cool, but I think it's underpowered. You have to drop a counter and discard when this card only comes with 1 counter and maxes out at 3? If anything you should add a counter when you negate Spells. Then again, that does nothing...you could have it gain more counters on its Summon, or even just remove the discard effect. Something like that would help. (2 points) Grammar: Looks okay. You can consolidate some sentences. Here's my fix: "Each time a Spell Card is activated, place 1 Spell Counter on this card (max. 3). Once per turn, when your opponent activates a card that targets 1 or more cards on your side of the field, you can discard 1 card and remove 1 Spell Counter from this card to negate and destroy that card." Granted, this changes the discard from an effect to a cost. Your original makes it an effect, if that's what you were going for. If so, it would need different wording from what I've put here. (2 points) Style: This card looks so cool. I like pretty much everything about its appearance, and the pic is oh so nice. Great job. (3 points) Overall: 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted June 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2010 Probably going to remove the discard part.Or at least change the wording to make it a cost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dxjxc Posted June 5, 2010 Report Share Posted June 5, 2010 Dchi, this is the second time that you gave the exact same grammar fix I did. I don't mind, I think it's funny. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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