in the dark of the night, I can see you.....

[Jord200]

[wolfman505]

7.5/10 the effect is good the pic could be better.

[touzaikokon]

While the card text is legible, in the future, I ask that you post the lore as well, so that it's easier to make grammar edits.

 

Effect: For a 1-Tribute, non-Special-Summoning monster, this card is fairly good at protecting itself and disrupting the opponent. It seems pretty balanced...you could make it work with Spell Counters and not LP so it can play with Endymion and the other Spellcasters. (2 points)

 

Grammar: I've got no fixes here. It looks funny at first glance because it has two sentences with "Once per turn..." right after the other, and I want to consolidate those, but I can't. But yeah, looks good to me. (3 points)

 

Style: The picture could have been cropped more to get a closer shot of the body...it's not a very dynamic picture, not very amazing...also, not set numbers, etc, which, while small, do help the overall presentation. (1 points)

 

 

Overall: 6/10

[Yang Xiao-Long]

Well I can see where you're going with this.

OCG looks fine, but the pic could be better (it's just a pseudo-psychic staring into the black space behind you).

 

So yeah, work a bit on getting better pics. Other than that it looks fine to me.

8/10

[NeXodus]

Wow, so simple. I love simple cards. Love the effects. I think the OCG needs to be a little reoworded but I could be wrong. The picture is nice. Good card. I'll give you a 10/10 because it's so simple. Nothing to complain about.