My first set of cards (Dragons)

[Smesh]

yes im a n00b, but tell me if this is a good start.

 

and considering im a noob i mite hav done all of this rong :p

 

This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned by tributing "Drakus Elder Dragon" on your side of the field. When this card is destroyed remove it from play or send it to the bottom of your deck. Discard 1 card in your hand to destroy 1 spell or trap card on the field.

 

 

 

This card cannot be normal summoned or set. this card can only be special summoned if there are no monster cards in your graveyard, and 2 or more "Drakus" cards removed from play. When this card is destroyed remove it from play or send it to the bottom of your deck. For each "Drakus" card removed from play increase the ATK of this card x 1000 per card. Check the bottom of your deck, if it is a "Drakus" monster, special summon it. If not, send it to the graveyard.

 

 

[Fader]

great start! a lil OCG errors here and there and overused pics but overall good cards 8/10!

[ParaToxic]

OCG FIXES:

Drakus Dark Terror:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing "Drakus Elder Dragon" on your side of the field. When this card is destroyed remove it from play or send it to the bottom of your Deck. Discard 1 card in your Hand to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field.

 

Drakus Elder Dragon:

When this card is destroyed either remove it from play or send it to the bottom of your Deck. This card gains 200 ATK points for every "Drakus" card on the field.

 

Drakus Ice Dragon:

When this card is destroyed either remove it from play or send it to the bottom of your Deck. During your End Phase your opponent loses 200 Life Points for each "Drakus" monster on your side of the field.

 

Drakus Inferno Dragon:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned if there are no monster cards in your Graveyard, and 2 or more "Drakus" cards are removed from play. When this card is destroyed remove it from play or send it to the bottom of your Deck. For each "Drakus" card removed from play increase the ATK of this card x 1000 per card. Check the bottom of your deck, if it is a "Drakus" monster, Special Summon it. If not, send it to the Graveyard.

 

Drakus Watchtower:

Check the bottom of your Deck. If its a "Drakus" monster Special Summon it. If its not send it to the Graveyard and lose 500 Life Points.

 

Drakus Defending Spirit:

When a "Drakus" monster on your side of the field is attacked you can remove it from play until the End Phase. Then Special Summon 1 "Drakus" monster that has been removed from play. Remove it from play during your End Phase.

 

 

Loved your cards and didn't mind fixing ur OCG. They're good for a new member. Can't wait to see more cards that u've made :)

Most new members make OPed cards, but u haven't

Loved the concept of "Drakus" monsters :)

Rate: 9/10 <-- Cuz ur new and cuz I've liked em :)