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Please don't attach cards like that, instead insert their code while writing a new Thread. Also please post the cards Lore cuz I dont feel like reading it from the card with such a small print...

 

Made it bigger for u:

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Still can't read what it says

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Please don't attach cards like that' date=' instead insert their code while writing a new Thread. Also please post the cards Lore cuz I dont feel like reading it from the card with such a small print...

 

Made it bigger for u:

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Still can't read what it says

 

Thank's, and here is the lore

 

Dark Magician Girl + 1 Dragon Type Tuner + one other non tuner monster

This card also counts as a warrior and dragon type. If this card attacks or is attacked by an opponent's monster, you can send 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard to destroy that monster at the start of the Damage Step (without damage calculation). If this card is destroyed, special summon the Dark Magician Girl used in its summoning, her effect's negated

 

Rarity Ultra Rare

 

Set; Key Energies

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OCG FIX:

1 Dragon-Type Tuner + "Dark Magician Girl"

This card is treated as a Warrior-Type as well as Dragon-Type. If this card attacks or is attacked by an opponent monster, you can send 1 card from your Hand to the Graveyard to destroy that monster at the start of the Damage Step (without applaying damage calculation). If this card is destroyed, Special Summon "Dark Magician Girl" from your Graveyard used to Synchro Summon this card. Its effect is negated.

 

If you ask me this cards effect is OP, cuz it destroys 1 monster per card in your hand... Would modify it a little bit but then again its ur card. I understand that you are a new member but try to think and balance your cards before posting em. Its not that I didnt like your card, its just that its way 2 OPed...

Usually im nice to new members and give em higher ratings to motivate em a little bit, but this time u'll get a 4/10 from me. You can b mad on me if you want to, but I would suggest to take my advice and try to make more balanced cards. And please use a better picture next time, this one is blurry...

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It's pretty hard to summon, but it effect makes it worthwhile. Its like a permanent Sakuretsu Armor. It's not TOOOOOOOO OP'ed. Ok, so the OCG needs a little work (I'm not the best person to help for that), but its not bad for a new member. Keep it up and don't give up! (I know, sounds corny right?) Good luck!

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Its easy to abuse it mate, no offense... Cuz you can manipulate the level of cards or even use DNA to change all card types to Dragon and use em to synchro. Its not that hard to summon as most people think. Sorry... Its not that I don't like it, i just think it needs some work...

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Again, you know of the limited list. Cards with incredible power, Mirror Force, Exodia Parts, Pot of Greed, Cyber Jar, ect ect ect are limited to one or none. Well, this card could easily be a limited card

 

And I do have a few other cards, are they balanced well??

 

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ULTRA RARE

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 "Chimera the Flying Mythical Beast" from your Extra Deck. There can only be 1 face-up "Malefic" monster on the field. Other monsters you control cannot attack. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the field, destroy this card. If this monster is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, and sent to the graveyard, summon forth a Malefic with equal or less attack points then this card,ignoring the summoning conditions

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Well, its a nice one. Your OCG really improved, but u've messed up a little bit in the end :)

On the other hand the pic is a cheap rip off from "Chimera the Flying Mythical Beast".

Maybe you could find a better one? 8.5/10 (Ignoring the pic)

 

OCG should b something like this:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 "Chimera the Flying Mythical Beast" from your Extra Deck. There can only be 1 face-up "Malefic" monster on the field. Other monsters you control cannot attack. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the field, destroy this card. If this monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Malefic" monster with equal or less ATK then this card, ignoring the summoning conditions.

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My art isn't the best, as you could tell probably. But I have other cards, and this one is perfect for Malefic cards like this, combined with skill drain anyway!!

 

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Ultra Rare

When you have the skill drain trap card out, you can remove this card. As long as this card is removed from play, your opponent is not affected by Skill Drain, and in exchange, this card's owner draws two cards each turn. Malefic Monsters also regain their effects, aside from their rule on being only one Malefic Monster in play. This card counts as a Malefic monster.

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Well, I really don't want you to dislike me cuz I criticize your cards. So I'll go easy on this one, the OCG is bad but can be fixed, tried to fix it and here's what I've got:

 

If this card is face-up when you activate "Skill Drain", you can remove this card from play. As long as this card is removed from play, your opponent is not affected by "Skill Drain". During your Draw Phase you draw 1 additional card. "Malefic" Monsters are unaffected by "Skill Drain". This card is treated as a "Malefic" monster.

 

If ur bad at drawing pics for your cards, use some that you find on the internet.

www.google.com <--- Does wonders ^^

 

Like I've said, don't be mad at me cuz of my criticism... 5/10 <--- Starting to like u :P

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