Guest Dark-Azkrin666 Posted June 5, 2010 Report Share Posted June 5, 2010 In Honor of Getting 4 Stars I went ahead and Made my first Member card and its part of a set that i'm making as wellHere it is if you wanna look http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-206680.html If this card is sent from your Deck to your Graveyard due to an opponent's card effect add this card to your hand. You can reveal this card from your hand to treat it as a Level 8 monster until it is sent to the Graveyard. Based on the Level of this monster when it is Normal Summoned or Set, apply 1 of the following effects:Level 4-The original ATK and DEF of this monster becomes 1800 and 100 respectively. If this monster destroys a monster by battle select 1 monster on your opponents side of the field and decrease its ATK by 1/4 of the original ATK of the destroyed monster and you take damage equal to the selected monsters level x 200. Level 8-The original ATK and DEF of this monster becomes 2800 and 1200 respectively If this monster destroys a monster by battle inflict damage to your opponent based on the Level of the destroyed monster x 200. If this monster is sent to the Graveyard by an opponent's card effect, Summon it from your Graveyard (This is treated as a Normal Summon). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Sasuke Uchiha:. Posted June 5, 2010 Report Share Posted June 5, 2010 It's good. Look at mine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dark-Azkrin666 Posted June 6, 2010 Report Share Posted June 6, 2010 It's good. Look at mine[spoiler=Member Card] Thank you ^^your looks nice to Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dark-Azkrin666 Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 Bump...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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TechnoDoomedOne Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 Why does everyone put extra-long card effects that would need lens to be actually seen in real life? Anyways, nice card, I liked the Level-changing effect. Also, two others things I liked from the card was the artwork and the code with the "666" in it. Just a question: if you change the Level of the monster to 8, then it would require 2 Tributes to be Summoned right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dark-Azkrin666 Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 Why does everyone put extra-long card effects that would need lens to be actually seen in real life? Anyways' date=' nice card, I liked the Level-changing effect. Also, two others things I liked from the card was the artwork and the code with the "666" in it. Just a question: if you change the Level of the monster to 8, then it would require 2 Tributes to be Summoned right?[/quote']yes you are correct about the tributing cost, It makes it more balanced. Also there are a total of 7 six's in all in the code, flip the 9 and add the 5 and the 1 together ^^Oh and thank you for the comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maz Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 nice, and i love the long effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dark-Azkrin666 Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 nice' date=' and i love the long effect[/quote']Thanks ^^ what would you rate it as? sry just curious Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TechnoDoomedOne Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 Oh, yeah, I rated the thread as 5. ;) Also, OCG fix is just in the spoiler. Pretty good OCG whatsoever, you just always say "make it count as" or something similar when it is "is treated as". The other mistakes are just some minor random OCG errors. If this card is sent from your Deck to your Graveyard due to an opponent's card effect add this card to your hand. You can reveal this card from your hand to treat it as a Level 8 star monster until it is sent to the Graveyard. Based on the Level of this monster when it is Normal Summoned or Set, apply 1 of the following effects:Level 4-The original ATK and DEF of this monster becomes 1800 and 100 respectively. If this monster destroys a monster by battle select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field and decrease its ATK by 1/4 of the original ATK of the destroyed monster and you take damage equal to the selected monsters level x 200. Level 8-The original ATK and DEF of this monster becomes 2800 and 1200 respectively If this monster destroys a monster by battle inflict damage to your opponent based on the Level of the destroyed monster x 200. If this monster is sent to the Graveyard by an opponent's card effect, Summon it from your Graveyard (This is treated as a Normal Summon). Some parts of the effect weren't bad written (which means OCG was OK), but was old-OCG, and those parts could actually be shortened. example: "as a result of battle" = "by battle" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 Yea, there are OCG errors and a terribly long effect, but oh well. Who cares? It's awesome! :D 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maz Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 I rated the Thread a 5, and I will will rate the card as a 9/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dark-Azkrin666 Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 Oh' date=' yeah, I rated the thread as 5. ;) Also, OCG fix is just in the spoiler. Pretty good OCG whatsoever, you just always say "make it count as" or something similar when it is "is treated as". The other mistakes are just some minor random OCG errors. [i']If this card is sent from your Deck to your Graveyard due to an opponent's card effect add this card to your hand. You can reveal this card from your hand to treat it as a Level 8 star monster until it is sent to the Graveyard. Based on the Level of this monster when it is Normal Summoned or Set, apply 1 of the following effects:Level 4-The original ATK and DEF of this monster becomes 1800 and 100 respectively. If this monster destroys a monster by battle select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field and decrease its ATK by 1/4 of the original ATK of the destroyed monster and you take damage equal to the selected monsters level x 200. Level 8-The original ATK and DEF of this monster becomes 2800 and 1200 respectively If this monster destroys a monster by battle inflict damage to your opponent based on the Level of the destroyed monster x 200. If this monster is sent to the Graveyard by an opponent's card effect, Summon it from your Graveyard (This is treated as a Normal Summon).[/i] Some parts of the effect weren't bad written (which means OCG was OK), but was old-OCG, and those parts could actually be shortened. example: "as a result of battle" = "by battle" Thanks for the fixs even if that means i'v got to fix the others ^^Also i'm assuming 5 stars means 10/10? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TechnoDoomedOne Posted June 8, 2010 Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 Well, rounded up, it's a 9.99/10. :P (Yeah, it's a 10/10) I just noticed that the 1 is also in the 6th position after the 5. Also, and curiosly, if you flip the 9 and sum 5+1, there are 7 sixs, and not 6. (LOL, 6 obsession) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dark-Azkrin666 Posted June 9, 2010 Report Share Posted June 9, 2010 Well' date=' rounded up, it's a 9.99/10. :P (Yeah, it's a 10/10) I just noticed that the 1 is also in the 6th position after the 5. Also, and curiosly, if you flip the 9 and sum 5+1, there are 7 sixs, and not 6. (LOL, 6 obsession) [/quote']1.Bump2.Thanks& 3. i got the number though the Random thing :P Lolz :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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