[TAG] I dunno... First?

[Jayden Dia]

 

For my First tag, I personally believe I did alright.

 

To get better. CnC is needed. ( Be as harsh as you want. In fact. I BEG IT OF YOU! )

[chairman ali]

I believe this is really bad for a first tag.

Colours are not bad but using orange instead of red is highly recommended.

Don't just throw in a C4D, you need to connect everything to each other.

Work with sizes like 400 x 100 then work your way up as you get better.

[Night]

You cannot just throw in a c4d as Ken said. You have to blend it in and make it work or else it just creates a double focal, something you don't want. And in this tag the focal should have been the render itself, although the lighting draws the focal to be the c4d. Not too good for a first, but if you take our criticism you can be better.