Need C+C on splice

[Demon From The Void]

 

Need C+C on everything please.

[So Legit You Quit]

Well, im no expert, But i have to say that the shading looks pretty good to me.

[Jappio]

I might give some, however I need to know what you're going for. I have an assumption the tail is meant to be a rock, but I'd rather know than assume before I get in deep. There's room to doubt it's rockhood.

[Demon From The Void]

I might give some' date=' however I need to know what you're going for. I have an assumption the tail is meant to be a rock, but I'd rather know than assume before I get in deep. There's room to doubt it's rockhood.

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Yeah, the tail is meant to be a rock.

[Jappio]

Ok I know you're asking for help on the shading alone, but I will mention that the sprite could probably use a bit more to it. If it's a retype or a splice, it needs more to really stick out, rather than just Mewtwo with a rock on his tail.

 

Ok I can see you used Geodude for this. You scratched where the face use to be. Problem is that Geodude's base shading is off the idea that he has a facial structure. Take away the eyes, but the shape is the same. This isn't too bad though since it is a rock. Rocks can be a bit obscure or random in shape and shading.

 

Part of the problem I have is that it looks too smooth. I think you need to add a some lines all over the boulder. Geodude had a face to give his face a hard and rough look. You'll need to have some border that create some jagged edges and such.

 

I'm not so sure I'm a fan of the lines at the bottom. They give it more of a wrinkled look, and that doesn't quite match.

 

On the chest pieces, you have two different light sources. A highlight on the right and left edges. Only the one on the right should be there probably.

 

So a lot of the shading on the rock you lucked out with, since I really do view rocks as one of the easier things to sprite. However there are other trick you can use to help it out I guess.

[Demon From The Void]

Ok new version added at the bottom.

 

Question though, if the light source is on the left why is the highlight on the right the correct one?

[Jappio]

Well I'm stupid. I had meant the one on the left should stay. Either I was thinking the Pokemon perspective when I wrote that, or I just plain don't know how to talk properly. Sorry for misleading you.

[Demon From The Void]

Ok new version added.