~NEW~ Ancient Protector ~NEW~ MUST SEE!

[FriendlyHost]

made a new card...

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding all non-LIGHT attribute monsters in your hand to the Graveyard, as well as Tributing 1 card with ATK 2100 or higher from your side of the field. This card cannot be targeted by Spell or Trap cards. When this card is destroyed, increase your Life Points by 1200.

 

What do you think?

[lolwhy]

8.5/10. Nice work.

[FriendlyHost]

grealtey appreciated

[Yang Xiao-Long]

8.5/10. Nice work.

 

That helps with absolutely nothing.

 

 

Anyway, on with the card.

OCG:

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding all non-LIGHT monsters, as well as Tributing 1 monster with 2100 ATK or higher from your field. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell and Trap cards. When this card is destroyed, gain 1200 Life Points."

 

That is really cost-heavy. That can ruin your hand advantage of some needed cards, and all you get is a wall that can still be destroyed. So what if you gain Life Points by its destruction? You're left wide open for an attack by your opponent's monsters, and you probably have a low chance of drawing a monster with a Level low enough to Summon right off the bat. (Also, you need to specify whether you gain Life Points by its destruction by battle or by an opponent's monster effect.)

 

The pic is great, good to see you gave credit.

Lower the DEF to 3000; 3100 is too high.

 

I'm gonna have to say 6.9/10 on this one.

Keep trying.

[FriendlyHost]

lolwhy's response helped me, because it made my day a lil better. Thanks for the tip, you're right, this card is not worth as much as it requires to summon. But.. what can I add to the effect to make it more valuable?

[Yang Xiao-Long]

For starters, lower the cost for Summoning. Maybe put it at 2 Warrior-Type monsters?

 

Since it's a protector, maybe put in an effect that protects other monster on your field. Or an effect that negates your opponent's first attack. Don't forget drawbacks; otherwise, the card will be considered OPed. Just don't add too many drawbacks, or the card will be rendered almost useless.