Overlord Lucan Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 [align=center]Hello people, these are my first cards in awhile so I may be a bit rusty. [spoiler=Dark Angel] Effect: When this card declares an attack you can negate it. When this card would attack your opponent directly you can negate the attack and increase your Life Points by the ATK of this card. [spoiler=Twisted Serpent] Effect: When this card is Special Summoned you can draw 1 card. When this card declares an attack you can negate it. When this card is destroyed you can add 1 "D.S. Beast - Twisted Serpent" to your hand. [spoiler=Frostblade]Effect: Once per turn if your monsters attack is negated you can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower "D.S." Monster from your hand. Again not so sure on the OCG. [spoiler=Shadow Knight] Effect: When this card is Special Summoned you may add 1 "D.S. Warrior - Shadow Knight" from your deck to your hand. Once per turn you can negate this cards attack. When this cards attack is negated you may Special Summon 1 "D.S. Warrior - Shadow Knight" from your hand to the field. For every "D.S. Warrior - Shadow Knight" on the field this card gains 300 ATK points. I am thinking of changing part of his effect to: for every D.S. Monster on the field this card gains 200 ATK points, what do you guys think? [spoiler=CannonShot] Effect: When this card is Summoned you may Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower "D.S." monster from your hand. When this card declares an attack you can negate it. When this card attack is negated you may destroy 1 card on the field. When this card is destroyed by a monster effect you can add 1 "D.S." monster from your deck to your hand. [spoiler=Dark Wolf] Effect: When this card is added from your Deck to your hand, you can Special Summon it. When one of your monster's attack is negated you can Tribute this card to add one "D.S." Monster from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand. There will be more to come, don't forget to review! *EDIT* Oh crap I forgot to give credits: All cards except Frostblade are using HP doom's images, Frostblade's pic was made by gailson. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 "can" not "may"I guess I can see some uses for negating an attack.I like the pics. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted June 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 Thanks for the fix, I will change it soon. As for negating attacks the set is based around reciveing benefits from negating their own attacks, which should become more apparent as I add more cards. *EDIT* Suggested Changes have been made.Updated: I have added a new card: D.S. Warrior - Shadow Knight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueEyes22 Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 kewl pics9-10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ksblade Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 Very nice job. 9/10. I also like the fact you used a pic of Nightmare Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted June 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 *Updated* I have added another monster! Thanks for the reviews, anything you didn't like? Anything you think is OP'd? Any OCG errors? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaia Overload Posted June 8, 2010 Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 Twisted Serpent - Why would you want to negate it's own attack? 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted June 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 It can be used to activate Frostblades effect, I will also add more later that rely on other cards to negate thier own attack. Besides its optional so its just abit of utility. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yang Xiao-Long Posted June 9, 2010 Report Share Posted June 9, 2010 Once again, "can" not "may"You capitalize Deck, Graveyard, Tribute, Summon.Since negating your attack is so important in this set, maybe you could add some Spell and Traps for support?On Shadow Knight, you can just say "For every "D.S. Warrior - Shadow Knight" on the field this card gains 300 ATK." Aside from OCG, the pics are good. The effects are kinda neat too.8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted June 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2010 I have made the OCG changes, thanks for the rate! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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