The gods are back

[daxtery]

My cards!

Pls rate and if I have some mistakes pls correct them.

 

Lore:This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "The Beggining of all".When this card is Ritual Sumonned you can select 1 monster that includes "God" in its card name from your Deck and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position.Then pay 1000 Life Points.If that monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard you take 1000 damage.

Lore:This card is used to Ritual Summon "Kundregen the God of the World". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Levels equal 12 from the field or your hand.

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[Coaster Guy]

this is terrible, masked beast>>>this.

but good idea and picture, and you have good ocg.

6/10

[daxtery]

My card's name is bad???

[Coaster Guy]

My card's name is bad???

 

it's ok.

[RAEGING D0GKING]

Losing so much LP for 1 card.

+The ritual is level 12

Unless the card with GOD in its name cant be destroyed in no way.

[daxtery]

this is terrible' date=' masked beast>>>this.

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What is this???

 

 

ok will fix the stars and the LP losed

[FriendlyHost]

okay card, and you spelled Beginning in the spell card's name wrong, lol. Try changing the effect of the monster, because it is very unoriginal/lame n stuff.. no offense, but if u still duno another effect u can give him just contact me i can give u some tips.. 4.5/10

[Zextra]

My opinion is that it is way underpowered. Basically, it costs 2000 LP total when this card is summoned and destroyed, and that is too much for a basic card with no effect. Also, the monsters used for a ritual summon should add up to the Level of the ritual monster, so you should only have to tribute monsters equal or beyond Level 10.

 

Note: Do you mean Beginning, because on the ritual monster, you put beggining, and on the ritual spell, you put begging :D

 

anyways, 7.5/10