NEW CARDS : Revenge Added.

[Rosuke]

hi there are a Cards i maded , please enjoy itz!

There are:

Graceful

Pain

Revenge

 

 

Lore:When this card is in your hand you can remove it from play to inflict 800 damage to your oppoent. If this card is in your Graveyard, you can remove it from play to negate the effect of a Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls . When this card is on your field, inflict 800 damage to your opponent during your End Phase. When this card is selected for a attack target, you can discard 1 card from your hand to negate the attack. This card cannot be used as a Tribute.

(OCG Fixed thanks to Pharaona!)

 

Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 1 Spell or Trap Card from your hand to your Graveyard while "The Sanctuary in the Sky" is face-up in your field . By decreasing the ATK of this card by 300 (Permanently), this card can attack your opponent directly this turn. When this card attacks, your opponent takes 900 damage. If "The Sanctuary in the Sky" is not on your field, this card is destroyed.

(OCG Fixed thanks to DHeroDogma and Pharaona!)

 

Lore:Once per turn, you can equip this card to a face-up Warrior monster you Control OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. When the Equipped monster attacks a Defense Position monster, destroy the face-down monster immediately with this card's effect without flipping it face-up or Damage Calculation . (A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.)

 

Comment/Rate appreciated , if you want help with the OCG'z too.

[Shizuku Oikawa]

A few fixes that I know.

 

This card cannot be Normal or Set, this card cannot be Special Summoned except by Sending 1 Spell or Trap from your Hand to your Graveyard while "The Sanctuary in the Sky" is Face-up in your Field . by Decreasing the ATK of this card by 300 (Permanently), this card can Attack your Opponent Directly this turn. When this card Attacks, your Opponent Losses 900 Life Points . If "The Sanctuary in the Sky" is not on your field, this card is Destroyed.

 

Well these is what I think the errors are.

I give this card a 7/10

9/10 if errors were fixed

[Mothball]

Pretty sure this should be in Realistic Cards, but eh, whatever...

 

EDIT: Damn you Dogma.

 

It's a pretty cool effect, and the image is pretty cool.

 

7/10, 9/10 with fixes.

[Rosuke]

Ok ! Thanks ^^

[Shizuku Oikawa]

Pretty sure this should be in Realistic Cards' date=' but eh, whatever...

 

[i']EDIT: Damn you Dogma.[/i]

 

It's a pretty cool effect, and the image is pretty cool.

 

7/10, 9/10 with fixes.

 

I don't know if I should take that as a compliment or a insult

I'm not perfect at OCG but I still know enough

[Rosuke]

Pretty sure this should be in Realistic Cards' date=' but eh, whatever...

 

[i']EDIT: Damn you Dogma.[/i]

 

It's a pretty cool effect, and the image is pretty cool.

 

7/10, 9/10 with fixes.

 

I don't know if I should take that as a compliment or a insult

but still a good card

Ty ! Card effect fixed .

[Shizuku Oikawa]

Lol I make edits of my posts alot

[Mothball]

Take it anyway you want. Just peeved you beat me to the Edit.

 

As for the card, that's looking alot cleaner Rosuke, very nice.

[Twinsoul]

wow very nice but i have no idea what OCG is so i cant really help you there... but its a nice effect and a nice picture(rateing 10/10) - Light Soul

[Shizuku Oikawa]

wow very nice but i have no idea what OCG is so i cant really help you there... but its a nice effect and a nice picture(rateing 10/10) - Light Soul

 

means the completely correct text thing in the actual card game

OCG=Original Card Game (unless im wrong)

example of wrong OCG

 

EX: card can attack opponent if you have card in hand and have pikachu face up.

corrected: If you have a card in your Hand and control a face-up "Pikachu", this card can attack your opponent directly,

 

conditions are usually in front of the effect,words involving the game are usually capitalized.Names of cards inside a cards text is in quotations.

If you played yugioh alot, you'll know what I mean.

 

that's as good as i can go.

[NeosWiseman]

First the pics seem awesome. And I mean insanly great. :D

 

Some OCG fixes:

Graceful:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 1 Spell or Trap Card from your hand to your Graveyard while "The Sanctuary in the Sky" is face-up in your field . By decreasing the ATK of this card by 300 (Permanently), this card can attack your opponent directly this turn. When this card attacks, your opponent takes 900 damage. If "The Sanctuary in the Sky" is not on your field, this card is destroyed.

 

Pain:

When this card is in your hand you can remove it from play to inflict 800 damage to your oppoent. If this card is in your Graveyard, you can remove it from play to negate the effect of a Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls . When this card is on your field, inflict 800 damage to your opponent during your End Phase. When this card is selected for a attack target, you can discard 1 card from your hand to negate the attack. This card cannot be used as a Tribute.

 

Don't capitalize so much. This is my advise :D

The effects are really good. As I already said the pics are great.

So this is a job well done to me!

Just work on the OCG

I'll give you 9/10, but it should have been like 5/10 so you need to practise more! :-P

Good luck! ^^

 

P.S.: If the second one is called Pain, shouldn't the first be called Grace instead of Graceful?

[Rosuke]

P.S.: If the second one is called Pain, shouldn't the first be called Grace instead of Graceful?

 

O.O its a good Idea and , Thanks ! for the Fixes with the OCG

 

Bump!!!

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