Ghoulish Posted June 8, 2010 Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 what do use reckon? This card can be Special Summoned from your hand while there are 3 or more Insect-Type monsters in your Graveyard. During each of your Standby Phases, you can remove 1 Insect-Type monster you control or in your Graveyard from play. During a turn where you removed an Insect-Type monster from play, you can change the Attribute of this card. Once per turn you can discard 1 card from your hand, all monsters on the field are treated as the same attribute as this card until the End Phase. This card cannot be selected as an attack target by a monster with the same Attribute as this card.no comments in RC? thats never happened be4... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted June 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 wow thx everyone, i really didnt expect to get people just look and not comment, that never happened be4?...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black★Star Posted June 8, 2010 Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 Why is it an insect?But any way....9/10i dont see any errorsI would have found it an intressting if it said "This card can be Special Summoned from your hand while there are 3 or more Insect-Type monsters in your opponents Graveyard. " Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted June 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 ...yea but what if your opponent has no insect monsters in their deck? its an insect becaus eu know teh cerature the chameleon i think its called that like camoflauges or summfin its like that but this looks more like an insect type thinng Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touzaikokon Posted June 8, 2010 Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 This card can be Special Summoned from your hand while there are 3 or more Insect-Type monsters in your Graveyard. During each of your Standby Phases' date=' you can remove 1 Insect-Type monster you control or in your Graveyard from play. During a turn where you removed an Insect-Type monster from play, you can change the Attribute of this card. Once per turn you can discard 1 card from your hand, all monsters on the field are treated as the same attribute as this card until the End Phase. This card cannot be selected as an attack target by a monster with the same Attribute as this card.[/quote'] Effect: Ignoring the card's type for now, it is well supported within its Type, and the effect is interesting and original. (3 points). Grammar: I'm trying to think of ways to re-word this card without changing the effect at all, but I can't. I guess it's just awkward that the removing 1 insect is not really a direct cost to change the Attribute. It's not important, though, it gives the card some versatility. (3 points). Style: Since I've got to address this somewhere, why isn't this a Reptile-Type? That's what you'd think it would be, intuitively. Picture is awesome, everything else is in line, but the Typing just strikes me as odd. (2 points). Overall: 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted June 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 damn how could i have not seen that reptile damn, and the removing an insect type from play, well ic ould justs ay once per turn discard 1 card from your hand to chnage this crd and all monstes ont he fioeld attrbutes then make this guy unattackable through the whole duel?? or i could make a cost that would limit his potewntial toi use its effect t some point. and the effect do3snt seem awkwardly worded at all? its like near perfect OCG and it makes sense? what part of it doesnt make sense to u? thx for the comment and rate btw Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touzaikokon Posted June 8, 2010 Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 damn how could i have not seen that reptile damn' date=' and the removing an insect type from play, well ic ould justs ay once per turn discard 1 card from your hand to chnage this crd and all monstes ont he fioeld attrbutes then make this guy unattackable through the whole duel?? or i could make a cost that would limit his potewntial toi use its effect t some point.[/quote']Nah, that's all good. I'm just saying that his Type should be Reptile, and if you change that, then he should be removing Reptile-Type monsters instead of Insect-Types. and the effect do3snt seem awkwardly worded at all? its like near perfect OCG and it makes sense? what part of it doesnt make sense to u?And it's because I wanted to put together the sentences about removing a monster in the Graveyard to change this card's Attribute. The way you have it worded, they're two separate effects. I wanted to word it into a cost-effect type situation, but that's changing the structure of your card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted June 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 ohhkkk i seee what u mean now, and yea if u have any suggewstions then plz let me know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExtremeG Posted June 8, 2010 Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 Love the pic and effect, but I would make it a Reptile monster, just because Chameleon's are in fact reptiles ^_^9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted June 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 yea this was orignally fo a insect contest gonna hav to chage the pic adincorporate the name into an insect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 8, 2010 Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 love the changing attribute friends,,great jobs..it would be nice if it is existed in real YGO..9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted June 8, 2010 Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 It doesn't even look like a Insect, but more like a Reptile.Effect looks ballanced enough.OCG looks good.But why is it Insect based? Becouse, as I said bevore: It doesn't even look like an Insect.An 8/10 (if you explain me why it's a bug?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted June 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 was for a contest and i dunno reptile type just slipped my mind and i straight away thought insect, i dunno lol@ maha: thxforthx comment and rate =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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