odin557 Posted January 1, 2008 Report Share Posted January 1, 2008 Here he is. Hope you like! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HMNISGwahahaha Posted January 1, 2008 Report Share Posted January 1, 2008 You should add "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by offering 3 monsters on your side of the field as a Tribute." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted January 1, 2008 Report Share Posted January 1, 2008 much inproved it would be a bit better if you lowered the ATK a bit... 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 1, 2008 Report Share Posted January 1, 2008 Pretty cool cards, HMNISGwahahaha is right about what he said.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 1, 2008 Report Share Posted January 1, 2008 Some Grammar errors, also the pictures blackness needs colouring in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 1, 2008 Report Share Posted January 1, 2008 The picture could have a better background and there are some problems in the effect. =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
odin557 Posted January 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2008 All the black backround is colored in, its just the shine from it being a holo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 1, 2008 Report Share Posted January 1, 2008 Could be improved 5/10 C- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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